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by Edward Nudelman
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January 17, 2006

A Jar in Tennessee

June 04, 2007 08:55 AM EDT (Updated: June 04, 2007 10:50 AM EDT)
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POETRY CENTRAL  Volume 2, Number 4  ~ A Jar in Tennessee ~

 

After reading the first poem I ever read by Wallace Stevens, a strange thing happened.  For several months afterward, whenever I heard the word “jar” or “Tennessee,” I  would think of this poem.  In fact, it still happens on occasion.  This is an interesting phenomenon often characteristic of great poetry which is capable of eliciting an instant feeling or recollection by just the hearing of a word or phrase.  The poem, entitled, Anecdote of the Jar, appears simple on a first reading, but has so much to offer on various planes of thought.  It has been explicated by poetry scholars in many different ways, but there are some interesting aspects which are commonly discussed in critiques of this poem, which I’d like to briefly expand on.  As well, I'll present another quite different poem by Wallace Stevens, an amazing American voice who is one of my all-time favorite poets.   

 

Anecdote of the Jar

 

I placed a jar in Tennessee,

And round it was, upon a hill.

It made the slovenly wilderness

Surround that hill.

 

The wilderness rose up to it,

And sprawled around; no longer wild.

The jar was round upon the ground

And tall and of a port in air.

 

It took dominion everywhere.

The jar was gray and bare.

It did not give of bird or bush,

Like nothing else in Tennessee.

 

(originally appeared in the 1919 issue of Poetry Magazine and later was published in his Collected Poems, copyright 1923, 1951, 1954 by Wallace Stevens.)

 

The poem has its roots in John Keats’s Ode on a Grecian Urn.  On one level, Anecdote is a commentary and comparison of Stevens’ own roots, a kind of critique of the poet’s homeland identification versus what one might have found in England, historically speaking.  John Keats, as sort of figurehead for quintessential british Romantic poetry, had "his" London and the high society art-critic world, the sonnet, strict meter, etc.  Contrastingly, the American contemporary poet (at the time Stevens wrote the poem) had Tennessee (a slovenly wilderness), a model for a much different art and cultural milieu.  Certainly from a historical perspective, that might be considered a slightly hyperbolic statement.  But, Stevens is trying to convey a feeling.  The poem, with its obvious purposeful “weakness” in rhythm (note the awkward flow in v3), as well as the unorthodox meter (the poem starts out with flawless iambic tetrameter, then has only two beats in v4 and variations after that).  Add to this the striking contrast of a polished poem like Keats’s Urn compared to a poem about a jar in rural Tennessee, of all places.  Helen Vendler, in her excellent book on Stevens, Words Chosen out of Desire, (I highly recommend reading this book) puts it this way: 

 

The American poet cannot, Stevens implies, adopt Keats’s serenely purposive use of matching stanzas drawn from sonnet practice.  Stevens was entirely capable, as we know from Sunday Morning, of writing memorable Keatsian lines and stanzas; so we must read the Anecdote of the Jar as a palinode—a vow to stop imitating Keats and seek a native American language that will not take the wild out of the wilderness.  The humor of the ridiculous stanzas and the equally ridiculous scenario of the Anecdote does not eliminate an awkward sublimity in the jar; or does it eliminate the rueful pathos of the closing lines.

 

How many of you read all of that high-browed critique into your first reading of the poem?  Not many, I would guess.  It certainly never occurred to me until I started to read some commentaries on the poem.  But look how the poem speaks on so many different levels.  You can imagine yourself being the jar.  You find yourself on a hill surrounded by the great outdoors.  Suddenly, the wilderness rises up, transforms.  Something opens up for you, this little glass jar of self is now surrounded by an entire dominion.  (As an aside, a friend of Stevens has said that the word “dominion” was intended by the poet as a double entendre for the famous “Dominion Wide Mouth Jar.” ) The indication of the jar in the Tennessee wilderness refers to the complexity of human feeling in the natural world.  A wild wilderness rises up.  The jar is fixed, gray and bare.  And what becomes of it?  “It did not give of bird or bush, like nothing else in Tennessee.”  The all important “it” must refer to the jar, and the insinuation is, that even in throes of compelling and perhaps unavoidable natural events (hurricanes, cancer, even car accidents), still we can find a way to rise above and overcome what appears to be alien and unalterable circumstances.  To “not give…” but continue to strive and be "a jar upon the ground."

 

Wallace Stevens (1879-1959) published his first series of poems in 1914 in Poetry Magazine at the age of 35.  He published his first book of poems a full nine years later.  Hart Crane, the famous contemporary poet of the period, said of Stevens, “There is a man whose work makes most of the rest of us quail."  Indeed, Stevens was widely acknowledged in the 1940’s as one of the greatest American living poets of the period.  His work became even more popular after his death, in 1955, and he is currently widely appreciated as one of America’s premier "poet of ideas" in the modern era.  His poetry deals with themes of imagination, consciousness, the pathos of life, and the dynamic forces and influences of the mind.  Stevens, through his poetry, has put together a sensual and imaginative worldview that is ultimately concerned with finding meaning and order in the universe.

 

Nowhere are these themes more apparent than in the late (chronologically) and fascinating poem, Local Objects, where the poet reveals in a striking way the depths of his own loneliness and inadequacies along with a parallel longing for that which can provide solace and meaning.  Stevens was a man that never settled down, both emotionally and geographically.  He had an early falling out with his father who disapproved of his marriage; they never spoke one word to each other after the quarrel.  His marriage was unhappy and failed.  In his poetry, he often speaks of resignation in referring to his shattered and lonely life.  In Local Objects, we see in the very first line a remarkable use of a very abstract and uncommon word, “foyer."  This is a word which Stevens masterfully uses to connote a space or locality where things ought to be peacefully and harmonically situated.  But for Stevens, they never were.  The poem spins an intriguing web of cognitive imagination around this one word.

 

Local Objects

 

He knew that he was a spirit without a foyer

And that, in his knowledge, local objects become

More precious than the most precious objects of home:

 

 The local objects of a world without a foyer,

Without a remembered past, a present past,

Or a present future, hoped for in present hope,

 

Objects not present as a matter of course

On the dark side of the heavens or the bright,

In that sphere with so few objects of its own.

 

Little existed for him but the few things

For which a fresh name always occurred, as if

He wanted to make them, keep them from perishing,

 

The few things, the objects of insight, the integrations

Of feeling, the things that came of their own accord,

Because he desired without knowing quite what,

 

That were the moments of the classic, the beautiful.

These were that serene he had always been approaching

As toward an absolute foyer beyond romance.

 

Can you feel the sense of loneliness and longing?  Can you sense a deep desire to have this foyer filled with beautiful, meaningful objects?  The poem is wholly autobiographical and deals with objects as if they were not only things, but moments, snapshots of experience.  Vendler describes this unusual transformation in terms of turning a spatial object into a temporal event:  “it is for Stevens the axis on which his poetry turns.  The world presented itself to him in visual terms; and yet poetry turned the visual object into the temporal integration, into that musical score for experience that we call a poem.”

 

Even though the poem has a somber tone, it is also clear Stevens takes delight in his poem.  He is saying that these local objects are to be desired and understood.  Perhaps not fully attainable, especially for him, but desired and appreciated.  A foyer must be filled with spirit, with a past, a present and a future, with signs of our having visited and spent time there, even if only in the mind's eye.  So, what kind of objects is Stevens talking about in Local Objects?  He doesn’t offer specific examples, but one might imagine rivers, trees, farmhouses, an attic, a rope swing, a local pub, a path, a hill.  “Moments of the classic, the beautiful.”  Stevens is talking about how important these objects become, especially for a man who had no “remembered past,” who was a “spirit without a foyer.”  The poem, in my view, speaks of the desire to find peaceful points of rest and identification.  “These were that serene he [i.e. Wallace] had always been approaching as toward an absolute foyer beyond romance.”  Note the reference here to his failed marriage.  

 

After reading, Local Objects, will you now think of the poem, the next time you hear the word “foyer?”

 

Notes:

To read more of Wallace Stevens poems, click here

To read more about Wallace Stevens’ life, and what other colleague said about him, click here  

To order (Amazon) a wonderful book about Stevens’ poetry, explicating many poems and discussing his ideas, click here: 

Wallace Stevens:  Words Chosen Out of Desire, by Helen Vendler, 1984, University of Tennessee Press  

 

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Written by Edward Nudelman, Books Correspondent for POETRY CENTRAL

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Comments: 144

Sue * Jun 4, 2007, 9:28am EDT
Yes, I will think of the poem when I hear the word foyer, and also jar and Tennessee. I can't say I really like his poetry, it may just be over my head...but, my first reaction the the "Anecdote of the Jar" was that he wasn't very good, and I'm surprised he is a famous poet. As a "neebie" to reading poetry, I think it has to relate more to things I can feel and see around me, for me to actually grasp it entirely. Good article.
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Ernie (Author of DESTINY OF THE DIVAS) Johnson Jun 4, 2007, 9:31am EDT
Nice lengthy article. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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charles thiesen - gather's only god, proud to be from gay-supporting Massachusetts Jun 4, 2007, 9:35am EDT
One of my favorite poems, Ed. Thanks for adding to it.
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Alta B. Jun 4, 2007, 9:36am EDT
Really good article. Thank you for sharing.
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Jay M. Jun 4, 2007, 9:37am EDT
Over my head for sure, but a very interesting artical. You are gifted to be able to comprehend the meaning... Count your blessings.
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John Philipp Jun 4, 2007, 9:37am EDT
Well written analysis. Thanks, Ed.
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Kathryn E. Jun 4, 2007, 9:40am EDT
One of my Favorite Poems of all, Bravo, Ed! Back later.
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Linda DeMerle Jun 4, 2007, 9:40am EDT
Nice and meaty. Thanks.
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www.simurl.com/mocnas visit website Jun 4, 2007, 9:41am EDT
Good post
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Denise- Marie Jun 4, 2007, 9:47am EDT
When assessing poetry, attempting to delve into layers of meaning- it's always nice to have...history. Poetry that is deeply metaphorical or keenly parodied or which references other works...is best appreciated with that knowledge in hand.
Personal preferences aside, it's always enriching to read an interesting review and commentary about any poem or poet- because you never know, what next writer, will reference it.
Thanks for an interesting morning read!
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Karen M. Jun 4, 2007, 9:48am EDT
This is very interesting ! Thanks!
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Faith H. Jun 4, 2007, 9:50am EDT
I'm bookmarking this for a deeper read later. I learn so much from your columns, Ed.
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Virginia M. Jun 4, 2007, 9:52am EDT
Nice article, Ed, but sorry, the 'jar' in connection with Tennessee, makes me think of moonshine, for which Tennessee has been famous;)

I DID get the essence of the article though, and enjoyed it very much!
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Anne Marie A. Jun 4, 2007, 9:52am EDT
I enjoyed this article and learning more about the "jar" and what it can represent etc.
This frog in Tennessee says Thank you!
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Dannielle S. Jun 4, 2007, 9:53am EDT
Ed, I haven't explored a poem in years, but this morning you provided a marvelous lesson on Stevens' Anecdote.

In one section, I love the way we have to switch gears, to see the word "give" in the phrase "to not give" as the refusal to submit or be defeated, rather than to be selfish or refuse to share.

Most of all, I love the way Stevens elevates his own Tennessee this way. The music we play in our fiddle sessions up here in NY draws heavily upon the musical heritage of Tennessee -- the airs and melodies brought over and kept alive in the folkways, transformed by the singers and homemade fiddles, and still beautiful.
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Jerry Kays Jun 4, 2007, 9:57am EDT
Your 'explanation' of the first about he did not 'try' to be European in style, doing it his own way ... and the second poem of wistfulness ...

All give me some hope that the book I wrote 'my way' ... not edited into something 'else' by the 'professionals' ... maybe has a chance for eventual recognition for what it was meant to truly be ... in some distant future long after my passing ... by some with a new appreciation past present 'trends' where the implicit is so well hiding behind the explicit.
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M. Bradley McCauley McCauley Jun 4, 2007, 10:04am EDT
I don't think I am poetically educated enough to appreciate the poetry but I appreciate your comments and presentation. Thanks for sharing.
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Sensational Sadie Sexy Senior Sitizen Jun 4, 2007, 10:06am EDT
More than I even knew iI wanted to know, but thanks Ed.
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Karen E. Jun 4, 2007, 10:09am EDT
Thank you ED. I have never thought of "foyer" as meaning anything other than that first place you enter when coming into a house. This has really made me use my brain this morning.
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Mandi -Watch where the chalk-white arrows go. To the place where the sidewalk ends. S.S. Jun 4, 2007, 10:16am EDT
Wallace Stevens is not my favorite poet, but you get a 10 for an excellent article!
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Frightening Icon, Official Varmint of The State of Franklin Jun 4, 2007, 10:17am EDT
Being from "Tennessee (a slovenly wilderness)", in fact rural Tennessee, with relatives up just a holler away from where the events in Catherine Marshall's book Christy took place, I lost interest once I read the usual stereotyping of my cultural heritage.
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 10:17am EDT
Sue, no problem, to each person their own predilection.

Charles T... nice to hear from you and find out Anecdote is one of your favorites.
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Carol P. Jun 4, 2007, 10:18am EDT
Vey interesting concept Ed. Thank you for sharing.
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 10:20am EDT
... and I couldn't agree more. Many (if not all) of the great poets spoke to the issues and concerns of their day. Looking back, if we want to better understand their poetry, we would need to delve into the particular issues of the period (happily done for us by scholars... and now with Google, etc... not more than a click away, perhaps, to gain some perspective)
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 10:21am EDT
Virginia, thinking of moonshine (viz Tennessee) in the context is a pretty good one! Maybe, in fact, that is what Stevens was aiming for after all!
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 10:23am EDT
Dannielle, you really hit on the key here, how Stevens used Tennessee as a fond locality... and it does tie into Local Objects, doesn't it.
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George Corneliussen Jun 4, 2007, 10:27am EDT
Having grown up in a rural valley setting that had seen many people pass through it (farmers, loggers, miners ) in the century before me. It was not uncommon to find things they had left behind laying on the ground in the woods of the valley.
To this day, one of the most lasting images from that time in my life is that of empty jars half buried in the ground that I would stumble across in my hikes through the woods . It always felt as if the person who had left them was near by, even though it was obvious that many decades had passed since they made their jar part the landscape.
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 10:32am EDT
Iris, you should check the link under notes for some other Stevens poems. Does this grab you:

Gray Room

Although you sit in a room that is gray,
Except for the silver
Of the straw-paper,
And pick
At your pale white gown;
Or lift one of the green beads
Of your necklace,
To let it fall;
Or gaze at your green fan
Printed with the red branches of a red willow;
Or, with one finger,
Move the leaf in the bowl--
The leaf that has fallen from the branches of the forsythia
Beside you...
What is all this?
I know how furiously your heart is beating.
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John L. Jun 4, 2007, 10:33am EDT
could also be titled.....Litterbugs Lament.
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 10:34am EDT
George, fascinating comment about finding empty jars. That never occurred to me in reading the poem
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Eric (Don't Tread On Me) Spindler Jun 4, 2007, 10:36am EDT
Great research, but way over my cranium!
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flit . Jun 4, 2007, 10:36am EDT
tying the jar with the making of moonshine just adds to the possibilities of the poem, I think.... thanks for that Virginia!
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Jennifer C. Jun 4, 2007, 10:39am EDT
I first read the poem; it didn't flow as neatly and compactly as I like, nor did it make as much sense to me as I would have liked :) I live in TN, but am not from TN. Perhaps that is where the lack of understanding comes. Is "jar" in the vernacular common to the eastern US, thereby making it at odds with Tennesseans?

The article itself is informative, as I have just entered the poetry genre. If you would review my poems, my latest at:
http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.jsp?articleId=281474977019095,
I would appreciate any detailed feedback. You seem to be an established critic. Thanks for sharing your poem, and article.
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Con Chapman Jun 4, 2007, 10:41am EDT
Since Stevens lived his whole life in New York and Connecticut, I wonder whether he ever made it to Tennessee (I can't imagine him going on such a long road trip with a wife he barely spoke to) or whether he simply used that state because he needed an anapest to make the line scan. ("Kentucky" won't work, "Illinois" would but doesn't have the same woodsy associations.) If so, more of Stevens' sly word play. I think you mean "throes" of events.
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Charles D. Jun 4, 2007, 10:44am EDT
ALthough I am not well versed in the poetry genre, I enjoyed this article. Thanks Ed.
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Jennifer C. Jun 4, 2007, 10:46am EDT
Hey, Ed, I liked the poem posted above! I assume it is Wallace Stevens? If not, it is very good. The picturesque forsythia is well-used.
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 10:52am EDT
Con Chapman. Thanks for the edit! I think you're on to something there, with Stevens' word choice (of state), viz Tennessee. It certainly fits and gives a real good flow to the poem. Can't think of another midwestern state or locality with a better ring (poets are crafty in that regard)
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Larry H. Jun 4, 2007, 10:52am EDT
thanks for sharing..
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 10:53am EDT
Oh yes, Jennifer, Gray Room is Wallace Stevens.
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M M. Jun 4, 2007, 10:53am EDT
Thanks for the fine article, Ed. Wallace Stevens has always both fascinated and mystified me. He has a highly distinctive voice and a misleading simplicity.
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Heather C. Jun 4, 2007, 10:54am EDT
I enjoyed your article, very well written and very well written! I find the coincidence that my visitor who was here all week with her son and dogs left this morning to go back home to Tennessee!
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 10:55am EDT
MM... very true, and some pass him off as not being deep or groundbreaking, but he is both, just, as you allude, in striking and unadorned simplicity. Just what I like.
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Mary McCartt Jun 4, 2007, 10:58am EDT
Interesting article, Ed. I read the first poem twice before I read your explication of it. I may need to read it a few more times before it hits me. The meanings in his poetry is well hidden. Perhaps I am just brain fogged today. I will read it again later. Thanks for giving us such a good article.
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Ron B. Jun 4, 2007, 11:03am EDT
Neat, entertaining article.
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Ruth MacGill Jun 4, 2007, 11:12am EDT
My impression of the jar is as a shard on the track of mankind that has been discovered with the realization that it is a sign of the pollution to an unspoiled, previously unpopulated, eden-like wilderness, bringing all the woes of mankind with it. I like Virginia's take on 'jar' in reference to Tennesee moonshine better.
The word foyer means to me a fancy mudroom, where you have nice scenery to look at as you take off your galoshes. OK, I admit I'm poetically illiterate
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 11:18am EDT
Isaella and others:

YOU DON'T NEED TO LOOK UP THESE ITEMS. WHEN YOU SEE BLUE IN THE TEXT, THOSE ARE HOT LINKS WHICH TAKE YOU TO SOURCE ARTICLES AND ADDED EXPLANATIONS, SUCH AS THE DEFINTION OF PALINODE, ETC.

CHECK HOT LINKS IN THE ARTICLE, EVERYONE!!
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Marvel S. Jun 4, 2007, 11:29am EDT
Interesting poems, thanks :-)
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Elsie Duggan Jun 4, 2007, 11:31am EDT
Thanks for all the information Ed. I love reading what you have to say about the poems and the authors. I have to admit I haven't read any of these before, but there are many poets I have not heard of, but keep going, you have mentioned a few that I have, lol. Where else could we get lessons like these.
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t b. Jun 4, 2007, 11:34am EDT
Edward, Elsie said it all for me. Thank you...t
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Otelia S. Jun 4, 2007, 11:38am EDT
I love the readings .In jar of tennesee, I especially like the line"The wilderness rose up to it"
Local Objects, I can feel the longing of lonliness. I thoroughly enjoyed
Thanks for invititation to read.
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jessie voigts Jun 4, 2007, 11:50am EDT
ed - you always make me think. great article!
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Michael Hawkins Jun 4, 2007, 11:57am EDT
If it weren't for Gather I would never have read this poem or the explanation and history that go with it. It's good to shed light into these things that I wouldn't have even thought of otherwise. When I read it I thought of moonshine in a jar.
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Peter, who hasn't changed icons. That's Jason G. Jun 4, 2007, 11:58am EDT
Of the three poems you featured here, I enjoyed "Gray Room" most. I absorbed your critique, and have to let it digest. You make some very interesting points, and I was further most interested to discover that Stevens had probably never visited TN. I'd have thought that he must have at least visited, because the imagery of the jug protruding from the earth on a hill was very graphic. Very interesting read, and something that I shouldn't have read at this time in the morning; I've got a touch of a headache from thinking about it as well as doing my work.
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K S. Jun 4, 2007, 12:07pm EDT
Don't think I've read about the jar since college ..... but you are correct, as soon as I read the title I ..... remembered ...
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Marge H. Jun 4, 2007, 12:16pm EDT
Ed, I learn so much from you.

I would have loved to have been able to interview Wallace Stevens. It would have been interesting to read his take on all of this. I wonder if he would be amused or amazed by our attempted dissections of his works
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Jennifer R. Jun 4, 2007, 12:57pm EDT
I liked it thanks.
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Eugene Carmen Jun 4, 2007, 1:24pm EDT
Are you a member of poetry.com? more exposure for your talents.
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 1:28pm EDT
Marge, he probably would have been only slightly amazed and quite a bit amused
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 1:29pm EDT
Eugene, thanks for the tip, but I don't need any more exposure, I just need to get better and continue to write poetry.
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Bill's Spirit Jun 4, 2007, 1:35pm EDT
Great article, Ed.

Anecdote of the Jar is a great poem. I believe it was you who first introduced me to it, in your article on metaphor.

I find that I like Local Objects even better. The concept of a spirit living without a foyer speaks to me in many ways, and I know how that it does in fact make the things imediately around you more precious.

'Guess I will have to read more Stevens.

Thanks!!
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John F Walter Jun 4, 2007, 1:45pm EDT
Ed, I think this is your best article yet in this series, since it not only focuses on one of our premier American poets, Wallace Stephens (a personal favorite) but also views him through the insightful appraisal of one of our foremost poetry critics, Helen Vendler, who I had the good fortune of studying under at Boston University back in 1981-82, when she was in the first full flush of her Stephens' insights.

I would say that you not only have got Stephens exactly right, but Vendler's interpretation of his poetry as well. Stephens shaped a rich, unforgettable poetry out of a deep sense of our capacity for aesthetic feeling, that is to say in pre Sim terms, our extended consciousness as a fully alert and alive subjectivity, that can find a way to bring imaginary and real objects and experiences from the past, or speculated future, into alignment in the mind's eye with sensory perception in the now, and create, as Helen Vendler would intimate, " a corresponding structure of the most exquisite feelings" from such a panoply.

You communicate this set of poetic intuitions clearly and concisely here, since you have ingested Stephens' poetry deeply, and allowed this aesthetic to stack up alongside your own without resentment or invidious comparison. Your personal admiration for his work enlivens this essay at every turn, and infuses me with a burning desire to read some of his poems as soon as possible. What greater gift can one poet give another. Thank you so much, dear friend, for writing so ardently and so well about one of our greats, and, in Yankee terms, perhaps our greatest poet ever.
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Jean Winstead Jun 4, 2007, 1:47pm EDT
You're giving us an education in 20th century poetry. Very enlightening.
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donna h. Jun 4, 2007, 2:08pm EDT
I know almost nothing about poetry
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Christine Zibas Jun 4, 2007, 2:21pm EDT
I far prefered "Local Objects," which seems to have so much more yearning and sorrow imbued in it.
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 2:23pm EDT
John, so good to hear from you on Stevens... John is the first poet/author/philosopher I met on Gather that shared my enthusiasm for Stevens, as you can see by his comment. And thanks for the encouragement on the difficult task of trying to abbreviate the ideas of such an astounding poet as Wallace Stevens. Your analysis adds greatly to the thread of discussion and understanding here. Many thanks!
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Barbara B. Jun 4, 2007, 2:27pm EDT
Whew! Ed my head is now full of words
that I must go to see "Webster's" to be
able to understand the meanings!! You
do write intense articles Ed but I love to
read them my friend. Thanks Much :)
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Sheila Deeth Jun 4, 2007, 2:54pm EDT
Thanks Ed. I missed out on studying literature at school, so it's nice to catch up. Thanks for introducing new poems to me, and new ways of thinking about them.
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Sandra ~ D. Jun 4, 2007, 2:56pm EDT
Edward, very informative review and explanation and introduction to Stevens. Thank you.
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Jen A. Jun 4, 2007, 3:09pm EDT
"A wild wilderness rises up. The jar is fixed, gray and bare. And what becomes of it? "It did not give of bird or bush, like nothing else in Tennessee.""

As I read this part of your commentary I visualized a city of stone in the midst of a wilderness.

There was so much to chew on in your article. Thanks.
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Gorgeous Gabby, a Gather Geeky Gal, and The Giz Jun 4, 2007, 3:12pm EDT
jar? hmmm,
a jar on a hill? hmmm
foyer? hmmm
deep
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Oran Giblan Jun 4, 2007, 3:18pm EDT
You made look up panoply.
I'll go with impregnable.
I couldn't break on through
to the other side.
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Nana to Seven Cutiepies Jun 4, 2007, 3:41pm EDT
Thank you for trying to pique my interest in poetry. I'm sorry to say I should have paid more attention to this subject when I was younger and try as I might I just don't get it. I think the only poetry I vaguely understand is the four line type where every other line rhymes. I'll keep visiting you though.
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Susan K. Jun 4, 2007, 3:45pm EDT
Always impressive!
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doria c. Jun 4, 2007, 3:46pm EDT
Great article,lovely poems,assesments way over my head.Thanks.
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Robi Y. Jun 4, 2007, 3:52pm EDT
very informative article thank you so much enjoyed it and learned as well...
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Esther IS Flesh and Blood S. Jun 4, 2007, 4:18pm EDT
thank you for educating me on a subject I lack education on...I will continue to look to you for more inspiration on this topic...
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Carolion Grailbear Jun 4, 2007, 4:27pm EDT
Thanks for the nudge, Nudelman (lol) -
Tennessee.
Family feuds.......
The longing, yearning, no-place-to-rest-my-head: the Appalachian mountain ways, the homeground culture, has so many touchy places. Family connection is paramount. I really noticed cultural stuff as I was growing up in E. Tennessee, since my parents were New Yorkers and the mix of Yankees and hillbillies in our town provided fertile fields for cultural comparisons. I learned to speak Yankee at home, and kept hillbilly talk for my secret language with friends. I also learned that my non-Yankee friends' families used words like "Honey," "Darlin'," and "Sweetheart" much more than my Yankee friends' families.
I basically adopted down-home culture, realizing how terribly I missed it after a few years of a marriage with an Ohio man...

All that is by way of saying, if Wallace and his Pap had too much pride to give in or even hint at reconciliation, why that's one of the aspects of the fierce tenderness of the mountain ways, too. And why it would set up such a longing for a home place that could never more be.
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ann c. Jun 4, 2007, 4:35pm EDT
Great article. I'll be sure to check out the link!
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K S. Jun 4, 2007, 4:36pm EDT
well said, carolion .....
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Sonia M. Jun 4, 2007, 4:54pm EDT
My goodness....I can't believe how many have already read and commented........
I have read the poem twice and know I will have to come back to read it again.....

As usual, wonderful article, Ed
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Carol Roach Jun 4, 2007, 4:56pm EDT
I wish I had the time to study poetry like you do.
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William Dotani Jun 4, 2007, 5:28pm EDT
Local Objects struck a chord in me. I had to move from my cherished home on a mountain in Japan. This home still stands empty awaiting my return. Maybe it's because of my culture, because I knew a lot of people from Kentucky in my youth: The Jar poem instantly made me think of moonshine and I could not get this image out of my head. I have a book of Keats poems. There were a few I liked, but none that inspired me. It wasn't until I read William Butler Yeats, T S Eliot, E E Cummings, Lord Bryon, and of course the lovely Emily D that poetry stirred my soul.
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vickey w Jun 4, 2007, 5:49pm EDT
very informative Ed, I had never heard of this author before, thanks for sharing this with me
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Amorita R. Jun 4, 2007, 5:53pm EDT
Wonderful Article.
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 5:59pm EDT
Wow Daniela, I do believe you've heaped some folks in my corner that don't belong there... but I sure do appreciate the thought of it! Many thanks.


Jacob, yes I have written two books (check my profile)
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 6:01pm EDT
Carolion... that's a great comment. Very cool you can speak hillbilly. I can speak yiddish (un poco). Very astute observation regarding the "feuding" ways of that region. I've never thought of it in that context.
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 6:04pm EDT
William... exactly same with me, re moving. Most know here we left our idyllic "villa" in north Seattle with our provencal gardens and have been in New England now for two years. My wife and I have been everywhere, but we were both born and raised in the Pacific Northwest, a beautiful, local place, and our house (we've had it for 12 years and still own it) is waiting for our return. I guess some friends and family are too... lol
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Dean Martin Jun 4, 2007, 6:39pm EDT
Edward, even though the Jar" in Tenn., reminds me also of moonshine. Good poem. Was a little bit over my head. But enjoy all of your articles anyway...Dean
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Trish A. Jun 4, 2007, 7:01pm EDT
Thank you for sharing this article. It was refreshing to learn that a poet knew "the rules" and clearly decided to break them as a means to express what he desired.

"Anecdote of the Jar" has powerful meaning to me. I grew up on a farm in MO. There was an old mine road and trash dump on the property. Everytime I uncovered a jar I wondered about the story that went with it.

Your article was filled with information. I too, will come back to it and study it. Thank you.
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Kathryn E. Jun 4, 2007, 7:06pm EDT
Just this week I have been thinking of this particular poem a LOT; by that, I mean, I would walk down the stairs and say to myself, "I placed a jar in Tennessee, upon a hill, round it was" ...and here, you have taken upon yourself to tackle this fine poem, and tackle it well, you did.

Stevens has an amazing American voice, a depth unequalled by most American poets. Other favorites of mine are Frost, Roethke, Hall, Williams.
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June b. Jun 4, 2007, 7:23pm EDT
Thank you ed for sending me this new experience...I can't say it was way over my head...maybe over my eyebrows though.
One thing for sure, you really make me think!
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Anne B. Grote Jun 4, 2007, 8:01pm EDT
What an informative and interesting critique of Stevens' poetry, Ed! I learned so much from this information. Once I took a course called Aesthetics and a philosophy professor analyzed Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird. It was then I realized what a genius Stevens was. And, I believe he was a banker? Thanks so very much for this.
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Edward Nudelman Jun 4, 2007, 8:32pm EDT
Jacob, it's because I'm a correspondent for the Books Channel. I publish this an article on poetry every two weeks (tagged Poetry Central) and it gets featured in the Books Essentials, but usually the next day.
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samantha b. Jun 4, 2007, 8:34pm EDT
thanks for the article!