"The Rhyme Challenge" n.2 (Memorial Day)

”The Rhyme Challenge” rule's:

You are allowed to write 2 phrases in 1 comment box as long as your 2nd phrase rhymes with the previous members comment's phrase last word, try to follow the theme at hand, in my Starter the theme is "Memorial Day"

1st comment

For every fallen soldier's grave

For what symbol each died to save

I'll use the above comment as a starting point, remember: the word to rhyme with is "save"

and the theme is "Memorial Day"

Have Fun...!

Comments: 11

Elsie Duggan May 28, 2007, 6:52pm EDT

They faught and fell like warriors

This was no game they played

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Michele (Misha) B. May 28, 2007, 6:56pm EDT

To fulfill a duty and a obligation to all who came before

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Mary Beth Magee May 28, 2007, 7:06pm EDT

While like children world leaders behave,
Our young ones to battle and death are enslaved.

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Margaret C. Harmon May 28, 2007, 7:15pm EDT

You can bet our soldiers always have fun and behave,

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Elizabeth L. May 28, 2007, 7:31pm EDT

Many nearly children, but still so bold and brave.
They sacrifice so that our very freedom might be saved.

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donna h. May 28, 2007, 7:39pm EDT

And in that sacrifice, those young and brave....
a heroe's welcome can be gave.

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Barbara L. May 28, 2007, 8:21pm EDT

The road to freedom they did pave,
And left imprinted on that "Unknown Soldiers" grave.

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Howard b. May 28, 2007, 8:28pm EDT

For every fallen soilder's grave. For what symbol each died to save. Every soilders life he gave. to stave off the enemies coming.

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Dan (Cowboy Up) V. May 28, 2007, 9:45pm EDT

For some, ALL is what they gave!

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Margaret C. Harmon May 29, 2007, 7:47pm EDT

The details should be put on the grave.

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Felicia R. Jan 7, 2009, 9:23am EST

Hello :o),

I just wanted to say I am finally going through what is now under 6,000 pieces of gather new mail that is in my inbox on here. So with that in mind I have finally come to a piece of mail that was addressed to me in regards this article submission you have created to share with the gather community. Thank you for taking the time and sharing your piece with us here at gather. :o)

And I hope you have a Happy New Year... in 2009 :o)

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"The Rhyme Challenge" n.2 (Memorial Day)

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