by manoj sanyal
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May 5, 2006

Fear (butterfly cinquain)

May 25, 2007 11:07 PM EDT (Updated: May 25, 2007 11:10 PM EDT)
views: 117 | rating: 10/10 (5 votes) | comments: 17

Dancing
Greens rustle up
And the blue veils darkness
As lightning sparks like a mirage.
Endless
Thunderous arid thoughts echo
And confidence shatters
Whiles the spirits
Wander.

 

 

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Comments: 17

Jim Ross May 26, 2007, 8:15am EDT
Beautiful, Manoj. It's nice to see your work again.
manoj sanyal May 27, 2007, 9:54pm EDT
Thanks Jim for your appreciation.
Yes Cindy... you are right. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Barbary Chaapel May 29, 2007, 9:55pm EDT
You have voiced weighty images here, Manoj. Good for you.
Heatherrrr Eloise May 30, 2007, 4:12am EDT
thank you for sharing.
this was lovely.
manoj sanyal May 30, 2007, 11:23pm EDT
Thanks Barbary ... it was nice to hear from you.
Thanks Heather for appreciation.

Best wishes.
Barbary Chaapel Jun 3, 2007, 12:08pm EDT
P.S.

And thank you so much, Manoj, for featuring my poem.
Payam Sudhakaran Jun 12, 2007, 4:28am EDT
That's a well-written one....
manoj sanyal Jun 12, 2007, 11:32pm EDT
Thanks Payam.
Best wishes,
Rajendra Pradhan Jun 14, 2007, 5:38am EDT
so butterflies are fluttering here!

nice one Manoj.
manoj sanyal Jun 15, 2007, 12:51am EDT
Thanks Rajendra.
John Harris Beck Jun 15, 2007, 2:10pm EDT
A jewel in shape and meaning.
manoj sanyal Jun 16, 2007, 11:38pm EDT
Thanks John for appreciation.
John F Walter Jul 11, 2007, 5:00pm EDT
A poem about the self scattering into bits, energy patterns, colors. Fascinating meld of structure and subject.
manoj sanyal Jul 12, 2007, 11:22pm EDT
Thanks Amy... Thanks John...
Take care and be well.
beautiful
manoj sanyal Oct 20, 2007, 11:20pm EDT
Thanks dear Jules B.
BEST WISHES
Dawn K. Nov 12, 2009, 9:31pm EST
sublimely beautiful!

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