by Mark who can't get enough sunflowers P.
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August 11, 2006

Day trip with the family (50 word story)

May 25, 2007 11:07 PM EDT
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Van full of kids, food, drink, gas.  We go to see what we can see.  140 miles of travel ends in picnic.  Walk around all day, see what is, head toward home.  Stop for pizza, soda, laughs then drive again.  Kids in jammies, wife and I relax.  We're home again.

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Comments: 12

Deb J. May 25, 2007, 11:09pm EDT
Well, that's just a nice little story there. Sounds like a good day!
Nic P. May 25, 2007, 11:10pm EDT
We had a tiring day

Delightful though!
Lisa J May 25, 2007, 11:10pm EDT
Such an incredibly pithy post...
Trish A. May 25, 2007, 11:10pm EDT
Isn't fun to finally get home after a full day.

I enjoyed your short story. What a challenge to tell a full story in less than 50 words.
Wilma M. May 25, 2007, 11:22pm EDT
Sounds like a fun time.
Leah Christensen May 25, 2007, 11:24pm EDT
Well done!
J. C. May 25, 2007, 11:58pm EDT
Sounds like you had a good time, and deserve a break.
Sonia M. May 26, 2007, 12:57am EDT
Good job!!!!
Jennine D. May 26, 2007, 2:17am EDT
Short and to the point yet fun
Karolyn Q. May 27, 2007, 10:02am EDT
Sound like fun!
Day Tripper Diva Aug 20, 2007, 2:56pm EDT
Awesome - please post to daytripperusa.gather.com or one of our regional groups!
tina s. Apr 5, 2008, 5:53am EDT
If you're planning a trip to NZ, be sure to check out Marlborough. It's the perfect place for vineyard exploration. Marlborough is the ideal place for outdoor adventure. http://100percentpure.wordpress.com/

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