by Sue D.
Member since:
December 16, 2006

your touch

May 20, 2007 07:13 PM EDT
views: 32 | rating: 10/10 (11 votes) | comments: 18

 

The thing

that I loved most

about you was that

You brought me to life.

I had been dormant.

Hidden in a shell of a woman.

Your touch brought hope

that I could find

myself again. 

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Comments: 18

Deb J. May 20, 2007, 7:15pm EDT
Very beautiful little poem!!
Jill~Sexy Back~ V. May 20, 2007, 7:18pm EDT
that's a beautiful poem. I hope the person it was written in reference to reads it.
*LORA* M. May 20, 2007, 7:22pm EDT
nicely done here
DragonSoul !. May 20, 2007, 7:27pm EDT
Sue ~ that's awfully sweet of you to say, but really, we hardly know each other! lol. Great verse and a honest loving tribute.
It's Not Me w. May 20, 2007, 7:32pm EDT
Like a cocoon turns into the beautiful butterfly... it is a lovely poem, Sue!
Sue D. May 20, 2007, 7:37pm EDT
Thank you ladies!
DragonSoul !. May 20, 2007, 8:42pm EDT
Who you callin' a lady?
Lisa J May 20, 2007, 9:23pm EDT
Wonderful...
Ron (in complete sheeple overload) W. May 20, 2007, 10:05pm EDT
Happiness comes from within, but there is a completing, a more than you were, with the right person. I hope this is what this is about.
Sue D. May 21, 2007, 12:04am EDT
Ron, it was more of an awakening. He did not complete me. I completed myself, but he woke me up, by stirring something inside me.
Audrey F. May 21, 2007, 12:22am EDT
Lovely poem, Sue!
andrew c. May 21, 2007, 12:21pm EDT
good poem sue
Rushmore J. May 21, 2007, 6:38pm EDT
very nice
Charles D. May 21, 2007, 8:52pm EDT
as always, a great poem Scully!!!
Sue D. May 21, 2007, 10:31pm EDT
Hi Charles! I have not had a lot of time online lately, but i will be over to read your new story.
Sheila Deeth May 25, 2007, 1:27am EDT
That was beautiful.
Sue D. May 25, 2007, 1:53am EDT
thanks Sheila

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