by Elsie Duggan
Member since:
November 8, 2006

sTARlight, (TAR challange)

May 19, 2007 05:22 PM EDT
views: 46 | comments: 19

STARlight, sTAR bright

How bright your sTAR is tonight

How do you sTARt

Your sTARring light

Is there a special

STARting light?

 

When we sTARe up in the sky

And see the sTARs dancing by

Do we sTARt questioning

The sTARs , their beginning

Why do the sTARs all twinkle so

Is that just for the sTARs to know

 

Then there are the sTARs below

The ones on earth that save the show

The people who stand above the rest

The sTARs that are the very best

STARting over many times

Until like sTARs above they shine

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Comments: 19

Rob Appell May 19, 2007, 5:28pm EDT
Right on TARget with this one, you little TARt...LOL! Another wonderful efforT ARtfully done!
Paula Love May 19, 2007, 5:30pm EDT
hehehe, must adnit I had to read this one a little slower to not mix the words up, lol Great job!
tammy b. May 19, 2007, 5:36pm EDT
cute
Larry H. May 19, 2007, 5:59pm EDT
THanks for sharing.
Nice job Elsie...! You rock, girl. wtg...!
Deb J. May 19, 2007, 7:01pm EDT
Yay Elsie! You got there quick this week, didn't you? You're doing a lot better than me! I was gone all day and then fell asleep for an hour, now I'm back on Gather, trying to "catch up" as usual!
Brenda Tucker May 19, 2007, 7:19pm EDT
That 's great Els...but will you please come and untwist my tongue. LOL LMAO You're the best.

bren
Miles E. May 19, 2007, 8:20pm EDT
Elsie, you done real good with this one!
Ellen M. May 19, 2007, 9:08pm EDT
Came out great Elsie
This is sooooo nice.
But now im sTARving, so im gonna go eat!!!!!
Keep up the good poems.
Lisa J May 19, 2007, 10:27pm EDT
It was wonderful. I am TERRIBLE with these puns, for some reason, and more so lately. Ergo, I deleted previous comment b/c it didn't sound like I meant it!!!
Sheila Deeth May 19, 2007, 10:59pm EDT
Nice job. That was very quick.
Alison H. May 20, 2007, 1:38am EDT
Beautiful thoughts, Elsie, and I LOVED the concluding verse, it was perfect!
Angie O. May 20, 2007, 12:50pm EDT
Very good!
William Dotani May 21, 2007, 4:35am EDT
I'll give you a star for this clever verse.
Kristen D. May 21, 2007, 10:19pm EDT
Wonderfully clever Elsie! Love it -- 10 gold stars for you!
Wilma M. May 23, 2007, 12:42am EDT
I was SEEING stars by the time I got done!
arlene (no shame in my game) w. May 31, 2007, 10:40am EDT
Cute poem written by a star!

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