by Cheryl W.
Member since:
December 10, 2005

Haiku Erotica

May 14, 2007 10:35 PM EDT
views: 240 | rating: 9.9/10 (15 votes) | comments: 21

my body is flushed

aching for your gentle touch

kissed by sweet desire

*******

shadows rise and fall

against a clear moonlit sky

our sighs fill the night

************

your kisses ignite 

oh how sweet is this wanting

how hot is the flame

************

our passion is spent

the morning is upon us

we rise with the sun

 

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Comments: 21

Sue D. May 14, 2007, 10:41pm EDT
simply beautiful
whew, i need that ice water, NOW! great verse!
Barbary Chaapel May 14, 2007, 10:41pm EDT
Haiku Erotica, indeed! (Smile) You've a great talent for these, Cheryl.
Mark who can't get enough sunflowers P. May 14, 2007, 10:44pm EDT
Very good. Haiku is a tough one. Restrictive yet freeing at the same time. I don't very often attempt it. I get too bogged down on picking just the right words.
elizabeth e. May 14, 2007, 10:44pm EDT
It's too erotic for me...it's 10:45 at night and I need to go to bed...the last thing I want to read is "my body is flushed aching for your gentle touch"....oh girl, I need to read this tomorrow when I've had a good nite sleep...

...but it's good!
Paula Love May 14, 2007, 10:52pm EDT
well tonight must be the night for me to come acroos the sexy articles, and hubby is at work until 7am! damn, lol
Rebecca B May 14, 2007, 10:58pm EDT
wow.. I Love it!! *snaps her fingers*
Sue * May 14, 2007, 11:06pm EDT
Excellent as always...
Connie W. May 14, 2007, 11:11pm EDT
sensual without being overstated. great.
elizabeth e. May 14, 2007, 11:18pm EDT
These girls are up for the game; but me, I'm off to bed!
K D. May 14, 2007, 11:39pm EDT
WOW! That's a good Haiku!
Spencer T. May 15, 2007, 7:29am EDT
Ahhhhhhh, yes, yes.
Jean E. May 15, 2007, 8:42am EDT
Cheryl - very good writing - you get better each time I read your work.......j
Va. b. May 15, 2007, 10:11am EDT
WOw Cheryl I felt the heat
Larry H. May 15, 2007, 4:59pm EDT
very nice thanks for sharing..
DragonSoul !. May 15, 2007, 10:19pm EDT
How I wish to re-enact this poem with that "special someone" hehehe. Well written Cheryl!
"we rise with the sun" i love that line!
Paula C. May 22, 2007, 9:53pm EDT
this is beautiful
Lawrence U. Oct 4, 2008, 8:52pm EDT
Lovely!
PURUSHOTHAMA RAO R. Dec 24, 2008, 8:36am EST
As long as moon shines in the nights
and SUN brightens the show during days
our love lasts long in time zones
and our desires and wants flame the candles on nerves

kudos
my thoughts exspand high after reading your verse

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