by nadya k.

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December 20, 2006

Perfection

May 09, 2007 04:41 PM EDT (Updated: May 09, 2007 04:46 PM EDT)

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The silver and velvet

clouds the midnight sky

and reaches down to earth

as it lets out a sigh.

When touched by the gentle breathing

of the restless sphere

the silvery moon that now connects

with the heart of the earth

will soon be forced away

turning dreams into the fog of day.

But for now the wings

of angels hover past

and the dreams that we dream

make our perfection last.

by me.

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Comments: 7

Thom R. May 9, 2007, 4:48pm EDT

Good write, I liked the flow to the end without diversion.

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Anne B. Grote May 9, 2007, 4:49pm EDT

beautifully written and enjoyable!

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Fred Hose May 9, 2007, 5:12pm EDT

Moonlight magic Nadya. A beautiful composition.
Where have you been? Missed you.

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nadya k. May 9, 2007, 5:22pm EDT

Hi Fred - I was just working. I have leave for a little more than a week and I had to get everything up to date before I went. Now I am at home and planning to catch up on it all.

Glad to know I was missed :-)

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MaLissa C. May 9, 2007, 6:18pm EDT

Wow--very descriptive. I love to just look up at the sky-beautiful poem.

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Trish A. May 9, 2007, 10:02pm EDT

Wonderful. There are numerous phrases that captured my attention, "when touched by the gentle breathing of the restless sphere", "the silvery moon that now connects with the heart of the earth" and "turning dreams into the fog of the day." Can't wait to read more.

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