Not just pink but "prettily pink". And "folded demurely". You have created tiny ballerinas, taking their final deep bow in nature's floral ballet. And the best is having the "Shhhh" sound as an active part of the haiku. Brave and "Quiet" at the same time.
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Comments: 16
Even a stupid dog like me can understand.
Those daisies sniff real good - I won't wake them up - I promise
And the best is having the "Shhhh" sound as an active part of the haiku.
Brave and "Quiet" at the same time.
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U wishing you laughter