This life is not enough
To understand a man
What a thing he is.
No dictionary has
Enough words to say about a man
Whatever he is.
Sometimes we think
the man is just like the summer.
Both make scorch to all living beings.
A man does by saying hard & burning words.
All men get burning of anger.
Sometimes we think
the man is just like the winter.
Both make tremble to all living beings.
A man does it by terrifying.
Both make fearful to all alive made by bones and meats.
Sometimes we think
the man is just like the spring.
Both make fall in feelings and dreams of love.
A man does it by his youth being full in glory or in full flower.
Both make the new world of love, pleasures and dreams.
Sometimes we think
the man is just like the rain.
Both bring greenery or destruction in the life.
A man does it by showering his sweat in the right or wrong way.
Both are useful and both are destructive.
Sometimes we think
the man is just like the noon of the June.
Everyone wants to go far from it.
The man is disliked due to his selfishness.
Both are uninteresting and non-exciting.
Sometimes we think
the man is just like the morning of January.
Both are lovable and enjoyable.
The morning offers invigorating bath by the sunbeams.
The man gives the shelter of friendly atmosphere.
Sometimes we think
the man is just like the Sun.
Both rise to light the world by their great work.
The man destroys the dark of the life by selfless service.
Both teach to be continuing in the work.
Sometimes we think
the man is just like the mirage.
We become as far as we try to go near to both.
Deer found no water and their thrust never fulfills.
Thus, the secret of the man is still unknown like the endless sky.


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Thank you for sharing this insight.
thanks michelle.
thanks tomi.
thanks vikky
thanks rosevear. you are so nice girl.
thanks mariana
thanks dolphi.
thanks joanne
you are welcome sigriet. thanks you so much
Sometimes we see
the man like the moon
weak at some times, strong at others
Dispelling the dark of some nights,
not seen in the dark of others.
and always reflecting created light.
You have provoked thought, and enlightened this reader. Great work.
I will send you a personal note about your poem. I think it is beautiful.
Words that face each of us when we try and stand alone sheltered from Gods Great presents within our lives!
keep up the good work!!
Nice poem ,nicely put
Keep writing and keep sharing!
never thought of a man in terms of seasons and nature, but you are right: this is what we are!
10 ++++
especially last para ... liked it immensely ..
thought provoking vivid descriptions held the interest till end and wow what a para to end it
Sometimes we think the man is just like the morning time of January."
I enjoyed your poem.
I copied the two lines above to make a point of how geographical influence affects our writings. Where I am from I would prefer the noon of June to the morning or January which can be very cold at times.
This is not a criticism; it is just interesting point of how where one is from affects their perspective in even the months of the year.
WOW KARL! YOU REPLIED IN POETIC THEME
THANKS HOWARD
THANKS KAREN, YOU ADVISED ME WELL.
O RENDA! YOU MADE ME WHOLE TOO.
THANKS AURORA D
YOU ARE GREAT SHEILA, YOU CAN LOOK BEAUTY IN THE MIRAGE.
YES GERALD. HE OR SHE BOTH FEEL PAIN.
THANKS PHILIP
THANKS AUDREY
THANKS ROB
THANKS JEMMA
WELL YOU ARE RIGHT MOYA.
I CAN FEEL YOUR PAIN CHARLENE.
THANKS SUSAN L.
THANKS SHANE
THANKS KAILEY
THANKS SAMANTHA
THANKS JOE
THANKS AARTI
OTELIA U RIGHT, THE MAN IS THE ENDLESS SKY.
THANKS GAYLE
YOU ARE GREAT MARILONA, NAMASTE
THANKS NADIYA
YOU ARE WELCOME CAROL
YOU ARE REAL PREET, MISS AMARPREET
THANKS ROBERT
THANKS THOMAS
IN THE END , I WELCOME YOUR ADVICE DONALD
thank you for sharing this with us. This is something you have put a lot of thought into.
10+++
thanks connie
membership,or occupation. A bipedal primate mammal that is anatomically related
to the great apes but distinguished by notable development in the brain with a
resultant capacity for articulate speech and abstract reasoning. Where do you find
this definition about man? Merriam-Webster's Collegiate Dictionary.
Now Raj my good friend, I think that you can be as abstract as you wish, and keep
writing these marvelous things. I do enjoy them so much! T.H.G.
I must agree with Webduck about the actions and thoughts of men, being so very
confusing for the most part!!! But I also gave you a 10 Raj!!
THANKS WEBDUCK
THANKS CONNIE
Sometimes I think
The Man is like a machine:
Cold, unfeeling; capable of
Good or bad depeding on
The Operator.