John you are so right on this one.. bird song and calls have a unifying effect on me. It seems to make me feel part of nature, and at peace in the world.
If not for line four, this would be a decent poem. Please don't think I'm bashing you. I'm sorry if you feel offense. It is not my intent. I am a teacher and I am always honest. Please read my poetry and give it a review. I'll respect your right to have an opinion, but I would much prefer constructive criticism. No matter what you say, unless it is a character attack or baseless accusations, I promise you I will not take offense. With the help of others I can learn and grow.
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Lovely poem, John!