There are two writing prizes available at the university I attend - and I entered work in both, even though poetry really isn't my ~thing~ ..... figured I should do okay in the short story one, and would enter a poem just because - not expecting anything of it.
Got email today telling me that my work was chosen as a finalist in both poetry and prose - there's a reading on Monday evening, at which the winners will be announced.
I've posted the poem before - one of my first ever - but in case you missed it, here it is again.
The sky is pinks and purples
with streaks of grayish blue;
reflected colours in the water moving
steadily towards the shore
disturbed only by the splash
of the large fish that taunts us daily
jumping always in the same area
of the lake, causing large ripples,
and attracting the attention
of the more adventurous of the ducks
that feed around their favourite dock
while the kingfisher watches from his post
on the wheel at the top of our boat winch
and the crane moves stealthily along the shore
leading with his long, slender neck
past the neighbour's golf course lawn
towards our own unkempt buffer zone
as the sky turns darker than
the unnatural pink of the water
before it fades into pink grey darkness
behind the high pitched whine of the frogs
and the swooping flight of the bats
who have decided that the sun
has signaled dinnertime.


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I give it the very best rating!
Congratualtions. I'm pleased for you
Corina... I wrote it because I was frustrated by my inability to take - or paint - a good enough picture of it..... decided to try to 'paint the picture' with words....
And Sheila, there are links to others of my poems here if you're interested.