by Sue D.
Member since:
December 16, 2006

no other man

April 10, 2007 12:40 AM EDT
views: 40 | rating: 9.8/10 (13 votes) | comments: 16

 

There is something

about you

I don't understand.

Can't put my

finger on it.

Like no other man.

 

a distant memory

floats through my mind

a subtle touch

trying to recall an 

almost forgotten time.

 

You lay clues

before me.

a riddle to solve

right before me

yet unresolved.

 

Peeling layers

to find more depth.

fascinating enigma

without regret

looking for truths

i haven't found yet.

 

cryptic words

guided belief 

it is your

truths explained

that are revealing

the core of me. 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments: 16

Wendy F. Apr 10, 2007, 2:28am EDT
wonderful poem
Fred Hose Apr 10, 2007, 2:52am EDT
This is a great poem Sue. I'm taken by how her love reveals her own core. When that occurs it's one of the most beautiful and powerful wonder of love.
Well writte. Great theme.
Charles D. Apr 10, 2007, 7:28am EDT
Very good. A well written piece of poetry again Sue. How you doing today?
David G. Apr 10, 2007, 7:49am EDT
I like it. Fragile.
Ricky Fico Apr 12, 2007, 7:23am EDT
Enigmatic man, I think I may know the true identity of this person. You see I was watching "Let's Make a Deal" the other day and. . . oh, wait a minute, wrong channel. Anyway, good poemm one that leaves me with a sense of intrigue.


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Michele Scercy Apr 12, 2007, 9:36am EDT
Very nice
Jessie W. Apr 13, 2007, 1:23am EDT
It's how we know true love is true....you look into his eyes and see a reflected you.

Great poem, so true, so true.
Sue D. Apr 13, 2007, 10:01am EDT
Thank you everyone for stopping by. I appreciate your kind comments.
Carol Lloyd Apr 14, 2007, 6:00am EDT
excellent post thank you for sharing this with us.
Donna K. Apr 14, 2007, 11:23am EDT
Beautiful poem. I can totally relate. And I love your icon, too! :-)
Sue D. Apr 14, 2007, 12:32pm EDT
Thanks Donna!
Joli D. Apr 19, 2007, 11:48am EDT
Hopefully this will not post twice (I forgot to sign in first after having first posted). In regards to your poem, "No Other Man" I really love how you put all that which is so intangible & abstract into words.

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