by *LORA* M.
Member since:
February 13, 2007

Darkness (poem)

April 05, 2007 12:35 AM EDT (Updated: April 05, 2007 12:35 AM EDT)
views: 32 | rating: 9.2/10 (12 votes) | comments: 18

 

 

                                            Darkness falls upon the earth

                                            Cold wind blows

                                            Water freezes

                                            Temperatures plunge

                                            And the Spirit of God revives all

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Comments: 18

Lawrence U. Apr 5, 2007, 12:41am EDT
Cool. Well done, Lora.
Connie W. Apr 5, 2007, 2:35am EDT
Just beautiful. Let's see more.
Debra H. Apr 5, 2007, 4:24am EDT
Lovley and refreshing to the soul thanks
Beautiful Lora! Job well done!
Free Spirit or the guy next door ~. Apr 5, 2007, 8:00am EDT
Nicely writen
Sherry Asbury Apr 5, 2007, 8:34am EDT
Very pretty and encouraging
*LORA* M. Apr 5, 2007, 8:40am EDT
t/y all. appreciate it
Christina Pilkington Apr 5, 2007, 9:45am EDT
I love how most of your poem are short but have a really good feel to them. They have a good beginning, middle and end. This was was nice because it reminds us that through the darkness and bad times, God will be there to pick us up.
*LORA* M. Apr 5, 2007, 9:47am EDT
that is what I wanted to convey. all to him. thanks for picking it up Christina.
Juan J Martinez Apr 5, 2007, 10:30am EDT
Beautiful!!
Sue * Apr 5, 2007, 11:37am EDT
Nicely done.
Michele Scercy Apr 5, 2007, 4:46pm EDT
I don't know why, but this feels very refreshing.
Angie O. Apr 5, 2007, 7:06pm EDT
Very good Lora.
Kevin F Apr 5, 2007, 7:21pm EDT
Nice thought.
*LORA* M. Apr 5, 2007, 8:44pm EDT
t.u. everyone
Donna R. Apr 6, 2007, 2:37am EDT
Very nice. I hope you post more soon.
*LORA* M. Apr 6, 2007, 12:22pm EDT
thanks donna
Carol Lloyd Apr 11, 2007, 5:21pm EDT
Well done, Lora that a 10

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