by Sue D.

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December 16, 2006

night

March 28, 2007 01:12 AM EDT

views: 38 | rating: 10/10 (11 votes) | comments: 15

Misty skies

rainbow eyes

and fires

in our hearts.

Sandy dunes

crescent moons

our love

we can't deny.

Drifting forms

feelings torn

like the clouds

that pass us by.

Starry nights

passion ignites

and the stars

fall from the sky.

Luminous Milky Way

dreams delayed

to hold you

one last time.

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Comments: 15

Chris Ahhhh Relief at Last XL Soon to be a L Mar 28, 2007, 7:13am EDT

Nicely done Soccer Mom Scully!

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Charles D. Mar 28, 2007, 7:39am EDT

Great poem to read while I sipp my coffee and stare at the screen. Good Morning Sue, if your there!!

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Deb J. Mar 28, 2007, 8:37am EDT

Very nice!!

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Sue D. Mar 28, 2007, 9:07am EDT

Good morning Charles!

NOTA soccer mom Chris!

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Juan J Martinez Mar 28, 2007, 4:43pm EDT

"Misty skies Perfect lines, they really flowed well. An Excellent poem.
rainbow eyes
and fires
in our hearts."

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Alicia Storey Mar 28, 2007, 9:24pm EDT

this is awesome wonderfully written and a great poem. Lovely 10 from me

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Sue D. Mar 28, 2007, 10:58pm EDT

Thank you Juan. How is the new business going?

Thank you Alicia.

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The Funny Guy D. Mar 29, 2007, 12:10am EDT

Luminous Milky Way

dreams delayed

to hold you

one last time

It's ok Sue, go on with your dreaming - I'm not going anywhere - you can "HOLD ME" anytime you want.

keep laughing
The Funny Guy

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Ron (in complete sheeple overload) W. Mar 29, 2007, 4:52am EDT

A look at the night sky lovely poem. Stars are where we find them.

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Michele Scercy Mar 29, 2007, 8:52pm EDT

I like this.

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Sue D. Mar 30, 2007, 9:46am EDT

Alright, Funny Guy, just wait until I get a hold of you!

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Braxton M. B. Mar 30, 2007, 10:13am EDT

Nice poem Sue.

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Sue D. Mar 31, 2007, 12:23am EDT

Hi Braxton, my new connection!

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