by Pamela G.

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If I Could...

March 14, 2007 06:35 AM EDT (Updated: March 14, 2007 06:42 AM EDT)

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For David

If I could,

I would grab a handful of sugar

to sprinkle along your path to

make it forever sweet.

If I could,

I would reach beyond the stars

and grab a galaxy

so you could call

the Universe your home.

If I could,

I would cup my beating heart

in my hands

so you could see how much

I love you.

If I could,

I would.

(c)Pamela Tyree Griffin ,Editor

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Comments: 15

donna h. Mar 14, 2007, 7:16am EDT

beautiful

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Anna Cellmer Mar 14, 2007, 7:36am EDT

Wonderful and sweet thanks for sharing :)

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Bert Van Essen Mar 14, 2007, 9:55am EDT

So good. I would not change one word. Lucky David.

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Barbra L. Mar 14, 2007, 10:43am EDT

I was charmed from the start, Pamela. You just keep blossoming, My Lady! Thank you so much for this impeccable read.

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Felicia R. Mar 14, 2007, 12:15pm EDT

You get a lovely Ten... Yea For you!!!! :)

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Carol Lloyd Mar 14, 2007, 1:24pm EDT

beautiful

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Rob Appell Mar 14, 2007, 5:01pm EDT

David's lucky he's got a gal like you in his corner.

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JoAnne D. Mar 14, 2007, 6:44pm EDT

Looks like it's your turn to Shine.

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Anila J. Mar 16, 2007, 5:48am EDT

Wonderful Pam! ( My niece too is called by the same name.)

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Susan Marie Mar 19, 2007, 8:07pm EDT

Gosh, pamela, we are ont e same wavekength here, I wrote of this too . . I completely comprehend this and understand, its lovely

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Erica Hidvegi Mar 19, 2007, 8:35pm EDT

Lets hear it for declaring unconditional love !

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jack w. Mar 19, 2007, 11:09pm EDT

simply wonderful

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Chris Ahhhh Relief at Last XL Soon to be a L Mar 21, 2007, 1:18pm EDT

Wow! It's hard to say much else. I'd rather savor the sweetness that is your thought.

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Claire S. Mudd Apr 2, 2007, 8:25am EDT

You truly have a way with words...beautiful poem...and I agree David is lucky man.

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