Only an Illusion

Darkness overcomes a sea of blue and promise

faultless harmony only an illusion

this perfect rose I once held a scar from her thorns I now hide

once believed she had no hold on me

only to realize I was lost the moment our worlds did collide

my sweet Mariposa my Achilles heel

you enhanced my being

now time is my allied as I lift my glass to you

Comments: 3

Barbara B. Mar 13, 2007, 9:09pm UTC

This is quite a good writing Juan, I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.

Carol Lloyd Mar 13, 2007, 11:09pm UTC

Thank you, juan

Sue D. Mar 17, 2007, 4:48pm UTC

absolutely beautiful