by Sue D.
Member since:
December 16, 2006

sun rays

March 10, 2007 11:40 AM EST
views: 34 | rating: 9.9/10 (13 votes) | comments: 24

 

Bright and warm

rays floating

through the air.

Feeling your presence.

Knowing you're there.

 

I touch you.

You touch me.

There's this feeling

It will never be

In synchronicity.

 

I can feel you.

I can see you.

But I can't reach you.

Not yet tangible. 

Something like the sun. 

Chasing shadows.

Always on the run. 

 

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Comments: 24

Juan J Martinez Mar 10, 2007, 11:50am EST
very playful beautiful
Sue D. Mar 10, 2007, 11:53am EST
Thank you Juan.
Mariana T. Mar 10, 2007, 11:59am EST
Oh another good one Miz Sue...lovely - Salud.
Sue D. Mar 10, 2007, 12:21pm EST
Hi Miz M. what a beautiful sunny California day we are sharing. The outdoors is calling me. I am glad you stopped by.

Mazhar, not a bad thought at all. I like the way you think!
Jerry Stubbs Mar 10, 2007, 1:22pm EST
Very nice.
I'll be honest, as far as poetry goes, I'm not a big afficianado. I do like what I've been able to read on your space. Thanks for sharing this piece.
Sue D. Mar 10, 2007, 2:04pm EST
Hi Jerry. Thanks for stopping by. You are new face.

Chris thanks for being honest. I am glad you have made an exception. I will be honest with you too. I really like it when you swear. Feel free to leave a few of them here, when you stop by my friggin' articles.
Alicia Storey Mar 10, 2007, 2:52pm EST
this is a nice play on words. Alot of imargery going on thank you for sharing
Rushmore J. Mar 10, 2007, 3:06pm EST
sounds like a fantasy lover to me!!
very interesting.
I'm curious to know if you ever reach him.....
Sue D. Mar 10, 2007, 6:43pm EST
You are close Rush. He is my lost love. We loved each other deeply, but life took us in different directions. He was a pilot and always taking off on a new adventure. He has become a fantasy now.
Rob Appell Mar 10, 2007, 7:31pm EST
Simplistic and sweet...deep emotion from the heart
© MrBill   Mar 10, 2007, 8:50pm EST
!FANTASTIC!
Charles D. Mar 10, 2007, 9:31pm EST
Sue, as all your poems seem to be, well done!! I enjoyed!!
*LORA* M. Mar 10, 2007, 9:35pm EST
nice
Visionaerie B. Mar 10, 2007, 11:31pm EST
Groovy! A perfect poem for a halcyon day like today. May your star continue to blaze through the gloom and darkness of night and foggy sights!
k b. Mar 11, 2007, 3:27pm EDT
LOVE IT!
Ron (in complete sheeple overload) W. Mar 12, 2007, 11:12am EDT
sycophantically (is that a word?) ethereal. A Ten.
The Funny Guy D. Mar 12, 2007, 12:17pm EDT
Listen Sue,
We all know your talking about me. If you want to go out with me, just ask. No need to write this love letter to me.

keep laughing
The Funny Guy
Sue D. Mar 13, 2007, 1:09am EDT
Funny Guy,

I would love to go out with you, but I hate snow. You will have to come to sunny California.
K D. Mar 14, 2007, 9:01pm EDT
Sue, I really liked that! It was quite touching. I guess somehow, at some level, I can relate.
Sue D. Mar 14, 2007, 10:31pm EDT
Thanks K.D.!
Mariana T. Mar 15, 2007, 1:46am EDT
Oh good Funny Guy in California - ohhhh Sue D. what could we do with that man - ahahahaha...Salud.

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