by Lawrence U.
Member since:
January 10, 2007

Dance of the Gentle Wind (Tanka)

March 07, 2007 05:06 PM EST
views: 35 | rating: 10/10 (7 votes) | comments: 8
 

Like the

Dreamtime ballerina, the

Gentle wind

Dances on my shadow

This autumn day

  

 

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Comments: 8

Carol Lloyd Mar 7, 2007, 5:37pm EST
lovely
Tonia, who hugs trees G. Mar 7, 2007, 10:43pm EST
Yes, of course it is autumn where you are. Such a gentle piece of writing.
Debbie G. Mar 7, 2007, 11:37pm EST
Beautiful Tanka ripe with vision!
Anna Cellmer Mar 9, 2007, 6:54am EST
You are good in these short forms, this one is sweet too
Audrey F. Mar 12, 2007, 12:26pm EDT
Beautiful imagery. I love the image of the wind dancing on your shadow.
Jerri H. Dec 12, 2007, 11:47pm EST
Ahhh.....the dancing of the wind against my cheek....I love the wind :)
Curt L. Jul 5, 2008, 2:41pm EDT
Love the Autumn and this tribute to it! Thank you, Lawrence!
Molly O. Jul 9, 2008, 1:11am EDT
Very nice!

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