by Sue D.
Member since:
December 16, 2006

enigma

March 04, 2007 08:37 PM EST
views: 25 | rating: 10/10 (7 votes) | comments: 11

He puzzles me

thoughtfulf and kind

can't let him go.

Then he runs

and hides

pushing me away 

just to pull me

back again

waxing an waning

ebb and flow

I am so confused. 

 

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Comments: 11

Ron (in complete sheeple overload) W. Mar 4, 2007, 8:43pm EST
The man likes you, but not enough to get him to like commitment, that's all. Great poem though.
Deb J. Mar 4, 2007, 8:57pm EST
Love is not easy, no matter how you put it into words! The question is "Is it real?" And if it is "It takes a lot of work & maintenance!."
Charles D. Mar 4, 2007, 10:03pm EST
Dosen't love suck. Tell him to make up his mind. LOL
Jeanne Nelson Mar 4, 2007, 10:09pm EST
Very nicely done, Sue!
Audrey F. Mar 4, 2007, 11:33pm EST
During one of the thoughtful and kind periods, it might be good to ask him why he keeps running off. I agree with Charles, tell him he must make up his mind.
Shawnee G. Mar 5, 2007, 4:00am EST
Very good. I was thinking of the word confused before getting to the bottom. I love it.
Rob Appell Mar 5, 2007, 6:47am EST
Nice little verse.
Debra H. Mar 5, 2007, 8:53am EST
Very good one, you have a good talent. 10
Michele Scercy Mar 6, 2007, 8:40am EST
This is very good. He needs to make a decision one way or the other.
Mariana T. Mar 7, 2007, 1:00pm EST
Dear Miz Sue, you've manage to convey lots with only a few carefully chosen words that do seem to flow very well...I hope everything works out! Salud.
Sue D. Mar 8, 2007, 1:24am EST
Thank you Miz M. I hope they do too.

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