The Neophyte (Tanka)

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Carol Lloyd Mar 1, 2007, 1:57am EST

that is lovely

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Mandi -Watch where the chalk-white arrows go. To the place where the sidewalk ends. S.S. Mar 1, 2007, 1:57am EST

ooohh... I like!

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Susan Marie Mar 1, 2007, 2:22am EST

Excellent Lawrence. I always see myself a sa neophyte of sorts . . . if oyu would be so inclined, please tag your stuff to Poetica. I would be honored to have this there.

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Lawrence U. Mar 1, 2007, 2:37am EST

Thanks Carol!
And thanks Susan & Mandi

I have tagged my stuff to Peotica, Susan. Hope it comes through! :)

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William M. Mar 1, 2007, 8:02am EST

I like it, Lawrence.

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Lawrence U. Mar 1, 2007, 4:42pm EST

Thanks, William. I'm happy you like it!

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Susan Marie Mar 1, 2007, 11:56pm EST

aww its not in there . . poetica -

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Lawrence U. Mar 2, 2007, 1:50am EST

Finally, it's in there, Susan. Please check! :)

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Anna Cellmer Mar 4, 2007, 3:26am EST

Lovely miniature, so much charm in such little piece, great

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Lawrence U. Mar 4, 2007, 7:07am EST

Thank you, Anna. :)

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Jerri H. Dec 16, 2007, 2:21am EST

Fantastic Lawrence....a beginner with great talent is always a pleasure to hear....especially since the shiny hasn't worn off yet ;)

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Lawrence U. Dec 16, 2007, 2:26am EST

Thanks Jerri! Merry Christmas!!

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Curt L. Sep 1, 2008, 12:40pm EDT

So lovely, Lawrence!

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