* Change the spelling of the word gravities' to gravity's. (Gravity is a noun showing that law is its possession here and it will need to have an apostrophe s to show this ownership (gravity's law).
* I don't believe law needs to be capitalized.
*Add an apostrophe s to the word season to show ownership (or possession) of the word drought.
If you mean it dies in one season, put the apostrophe after the word season and add the apostrophe s (season's) to show singular ownership.
If more than one season brings about a drought, add the s to the word season and put the apostrophe after the s (seasons') to show plural possession.
Barbra- Thank you! You are right. I was sloppy, allowing these mistakes take away from my work. ahhh but I have learned a valuable lesson, ...the 'spell check' cannot always be counted on! lol
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Virginia:
Great message in the haiku and the photo brings it to life even more. A very nice couple!
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Regarding critiques you asked for:
* Change the spelling of the word gravities' to gravity's. (Gravity is a noun showing that law is its possession here and it will need to have an apostrophe s to show this ownership (gravity's law).
* I don't believe law needs to be capitalized.
*Add an apostrophe s to the word season to show ownership (or possession) of the word drought.
If you mean it dies in one season, put the apostrophe after the word season and add the apostrophe s (season's) to show singular ownership.
If more than one season brings about a drought, add the s to the word season and put the apostrophe after the s (seasons') to show plural possession.
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very real haiku
Anne, Dawn- Thank you!:)
Virginia, lovely haiku! Stunning photo! I long to step inside of it and commune with nature!