by Laura Cushing
Member since:
August 4, 2006

Six word story

February 23, 2007 12:17 AM EST (Updated: February 23, 2007 01:00 AM EST)
views: 93 | comments: 19

fileId:3096224744036900;size:full; We slept

together; woke

separately sided. 
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Comments: 19

Patry Francis Feb 23, 2007, 12:25am EST
What a sad story! The photo speaks volumes!
Mark S. Feb 23, 2007, 12:33am EST
wow, i am actually inspired now... the style makes me mad at myself for not being able to remember the second line of Ezra Pound "In a Station at the Metro"
Anne Marie A. Feb 23, 2007, 12:39am EST
:0)
Ruth MacGill Feb 23, 2007, 12:40am EST
Better that they had only slept.
Charles Lennox Feb 23, 2007, 1:12am EST
Wow, that's a lot of groups for six words. :)
Dolphi D. Feb 23, 2007, 1:25am EST
Great! Those six words speak volumes.
Debra H. Feb 23, 2007, 1:25am EST
Heartbreaker. 10
Laura Cushing Feb 23, 2007, 1:32am EST
Charles - I know, I should have posted it to six groups to match the wordcount, hehe. But I was proud of how it turned out, so I wanted everyone to see!

I think I might try more of these- it was a lot of fun. I searched for a random picture (this one came from an ad for beds) and just wrote the six words that came to mind.
Pat M. Feb 23, 2007, 1:42am EST
An expertly chosen six words they were too.
(The Other) Dale C. Feb 23, 2007, 2:35am EST
I sleep in the other room. *another 6 word story*
Sherry Asbury Feb 23, 2007, 6:08am EST
I sleep and dream of Johnny

Clever idea - love this!
Barb S. Feb 23, 2007, 7:02am EST
That sounds like my house, but not because we don't like each other. My husband can't sleep if anything living and breathing touches while he's asleep. That's part of the reason why the cats aren't allowed in the bed.
DragonSoul !. Feb 23, 2007, 7:10am EST
Interesting concept of the six word story. Yours came together beautifully.
Nicely done. I'll look to see more.
Carol Lloyd Feb 23, 2007, 3:08pm EST
Nicely done
Larry H. Feb 23, 2007, 10:00pm EST
thanks for sharing...
Willy C. Feb 24, 2007, 7:29pm EST
Almost a haiku there. Without the photo/image, the words would have been just info. With the image, the words come out to form a caption.

Together the image and the words are more denotation than connotation.
Pamela G. Mar 25, 2007, 5:41am EDT
Well done!

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