by Lawrence U.
Member since:
January 10, 2007

Wandering Moon (Tanka)

February 21, 2007 05:01 PM EST
views: 30 | rating: 10/10 (6 votes) | comments: 11

  

The wandering  

Moon in my visual field  

Flashing

Her beautiful smile

Over my shadow 

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Comments: 11

sheila ~the hapless housewife~ j. Feb 21, 2007, 9:39pm EST
Wonderful!
Wendy F. Feb 24, 2007, 10:12am EST
great stuff
Cinnamon and everything not so nice *. Feb 27, 2007, 2:36am EST
Romantic poem
Jim Ross Feb 27, 2007, 2:33pm EST
Very nice, Lawrence.
Jerri H. Dec 22, 2007, 9:05am EST
This is how I felt yesterday....the moon didn't want to be shot by me....kept hiding behind the clouds like a shy maiden.
Curt L. Jan 17, 2008, 11:13am EST
Love this one, Lawrence! 10!
Curt L. Jan 22, 2008, 6:41pm EST
SO BEAUTIFUL!
Abby N. Oct 16, 2008, 12:29am EDT
Very nice! :)
Abby N. Oct 16, 2008, 12:29am EDT
Ten for you!
Abby N. Oct 16, 2008, 12:29am EDT
Have a wonderful Wednesday!

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