by gautami tripathy

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May 2, 2006

splattered...haiku?

February 14, 2007 08:32 AM EST

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rainy roads-
swishing cars
mud all over

Tags: random musings, haiku, short, brief, gautami tripathy

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Carol Lloyd Feb 14, 2007, 10:35am EST

very nice ty

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gautami tripathy Feb 14, 2007, 11:53am EST

Thanks Carol.

I know that very well, Amy. That is Japanese. English version is flexible. You can chk that all over the net.

I have been writing haikus since I started to write. This time I am taking up the briefest of briefs. Lesser the better.

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Larry H. Feb 14, 2007, 11:59am EST

thanks for sharing

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Carol Roach Feb 14, 2007, 1:06pm EST

yep now the feeling of getting splattered by the mud from the cars as well

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Pat M. Feb 14, 2007, 4:00pm EST

Elegant. A written cameo.

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amanda wallin Feb 15, 2007, 1:22pm EST

Palpable detail in such a succinct format. Excellent evocative word choice. I missed your brilliant writing my friend.

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