Mad I am (etheree with reverse etheree)

February 12, 2007 12:32 AM EST (Updated: March 14, 2007 03:11 AM EDT)

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Who

Are you?

Mad I am.

You made me mad.

You come in my dreams

With sapphire blue deep eyes,

Tourmaline lips and pearl cheeks,

Onyx eyebrows with coral hairs

And necklace of garnets and some jade

Along nose ring of crystallite glitter.

You come with coolness of emerald green,

Ruby red passion with amber look,

Amethyst smiles and topaz luck

And wear luscious white dress.

Are you my illusion?

My queen imagines?

My dream life beat?

Am I mad?

Yes, mad

I.---

Tags: short poem, free write, poems, eheree, poem, poetry, short musings, random musing, prose-poetry, manoj, short verse, poetic expression, writing

To Groups: Wishes, Goals, and Dreams...OH MY!, Poetry, Free Thinking, Poetically Incorrect, Poetic expressions, originalpoetryaspirants, Light of Poetry

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Comments: 7

John F Walter Feb 12, 2007, 12:48am EST

Fabulous form and symmetry in this love enamoured raving reverie, manoj. What a joy to read your words and see the image built up from your exquisite description, all framed in your passionate voice of love's delirium. I loved this. Great structure for the outpouring of specific gorgeous pictures in song.