I like it - I think it is about that white stuff you humans call snow? I can't be certain because I have never seen any! I'm told it is wet and cold! Try to keep your nose warm and your paws dry!
Jessie, dare I write another one! Thank you. Floyd, you are obviously a well read dog, you are right. I think you would like it. If you looked up it would melt in your mouth and you could leap to catch it and really have fun. woofs to you. Mandi, thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed my experiment. Moya
Moya, i came looking for haiku. I found it. I have been pondering writing my first haiku- since the day in grade school when I had to write my first and as yet, only haiku. You have changed in my mind about what haiku is.
What is was- 5, 7, 5 about nature What it is now- mysterious and Beautiful!
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(gather has asked for a ton of my group pages to be featured on the home page... so I am updating the features like crazy! Keep those haikus coming!)
Floyd, you are obviously a well read dog, you are right. I think you would like it. If you looked up it would melt in your mouth and you could leap to catch it and really have fun. woofs to you.
Mandi, thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed my experiment. Moya
I followed it all the way down -
left right
left right
left right, where it settled.
Go well,
Malcolm/Offa
What is was- 5, 7, 5 about nature
What it is now- mysterious and Beautiful!
Infinitely crystal
Dusting the planet