by Terry S.
Member since:
November 10, 2006

Eyes

January 28, 2007 08:43 PM EST
views: 41 | rating: 9.9/10 (17 votes) | comments: 17

They sweetly draw me close

Their woe for love survives

They're passion's clue to love still new

The love that is in your eyes

 

With almond shape so full yet round

The brown I see so divine

I look your way and know today

Your eyes have looked for mine 

 

 

 

 

 

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Comments: 17

♥kyra D. Jan 28, 2007, 8:52pm EST
Beautiful!
Carol Lloyd Jan 28, 2007, 8:55pm EST
absolutely wonderful terry
BRIDGET M. Jan 28, 2007, 8:59pm EST
ahhh you romantic you !!
Howard b. Jan 28, 2007, 9:13pm EST
Very nice .terry. I like it.
Lisa B. Jan 28, 2007, 9:19pm EST
Loved it!
Tab B. Jan 28, 2007, 10:25pm EST
awwwwwwwwwwww! 10!
Johnny Gregory Jan 28, 2007, 10:45pm EST
Awww. This is sweet.
Laura H. Jan 28, 2007, 10:59pm EST
How deliciously sweet and romantic!
William M. Jan 28, 2007, 11:02pm EST
I like it. I like it.
Leah Christensen Jan 29, 2007, 7:16am EST
Beautiful!!!
Janet Somewhere Up On The Mount Jan 29, 2007, 8:14am EST
Good Stuff right there Terry. Good Job.
PS No hook on there I hope. teehee
Cheryl W. Jan 29, 2007, 8:29am EST
This is lovely, Terry..
Randy- Being true to myself Jan 29, 2007, 9:01am EST
Such a wonderful writing, and it is so easy to see the beautiful brown eyes. Thank you for taking us there.
~*Jackie Ferrari*~ Jan 29, 2007, 10:39am EST
That is pretty, Terry.

Nothing like eyes finding love in anothers............
~JennyBean~ H. Jan 29, 2007, 5:44pm EST
This poem is very romantic, and beautiful.
Karolyn Q. Feb 1, 2007, 7:31pm EST
Beautiful.

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