by Tab B.
Member since:
August 29, 2006

Shower

January 24, 2007 04:02 PM EST
views: 8 | rating: 10/10 (1 vote) | comments: 6

Warm water falling

against my skin

Soap on, soap off

Feels good to be clean

 

Cold outside; but steamy within

10 minutes, 20, is 30 too long?

 The water gets cold and

I've finished my song.

 

Wonderful to feel

This warm water falling

Water on, water off

The day is calling

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Comments: 6

Connie C. Jan 24, 2007, 4:40pm EST
That is beautiful. I love it
Tab B. Jan 24, 2007, 5:34pm EST
Thank you, Connie. I have never tried it, but it seems so easy for others on here, so I thought I'd give it a shot.
I was in the shower and not wanting to get out at all when the words starting flowing. Guess I had to get out then or I'd have forgotten the words!
William M. Jan 24, 2007, 9:06pm EST
I can almost feel it. Great.
Tab B. Jan 24, 2007, 10:38pm EST
Thanks, William.
Kathy P. Jan 25, 2007, 12:51pm EST
This is great . You have a quiet shower someone always finds me when I am in the shower and bangs on the door.
Tab B. Jan 25, 2007, 1:27pm EST
Kathy, most times I take my shower during the kids' nap time. No interruption then!

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