by K N.

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August 26, 2006

takes two

January 23, 2007 10:21 AM EST (Updated: January 23, 2007 03:09 PM EST)

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he spoke

in parts not whole

and my soul's response

quicken'd my breath

not his

faith follow'd the flow

of jagged barbs

exchanged with care

by him

fortune took it's turn

leaving me to swallow

bittersweet twists of fate

without

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Rene Edde Jan 23, 2007, 10:39am EST

ohhh, i love the imagery here! It overwhelms me with a sense of longing and craving that I can feel in my core! Rockin poem!

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K N. Jan 23, 2007, 3:03pm EST

thanks guys!!

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Mike S. Jan 23, 2007, 8:28pm EST

This goes where words usually don't serve.
But that's the beauty of it.
It's alike a snapshpot of a moment frozen in time..

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K N. Jan 25, 2007, 12:49pm EST

that's what i wanted!!! :) thanks mikey!

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Tony Close Feb 4, 2007, 9:36am EST

K N, this is compelling. Lovely flow and very touching. Thanks.

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