This is a poem I submitted some time ago. A couple of folks have claimed that it was anti semetic. I resubmit it for scrutiny. If you think it is anti-semitic please tell me why you believe its contents to be anti-semetic, as this is not my intention nor is it my intention for anti semetism to be the nature of psyche. Thank you. ÂÂÂ
Peace. ÂÂÂ
“Murdering The Innocent”
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The innocent bystander killed by assassins unknown...ÂÂÂ
no mercy shown... SACRED HUMAN LIFE... BLOWN...ÂÂÂ
Justice stabbed through the heart by assassins unknown.
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Murderous Colonialism, social democratic capitalism, or religious fanaticism...
All bloody ism schisms, shined through truth’s prism are nothings but Satanism.
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It’s not about oil, or defending one’s home soil,
It’s about ego, I am better than he, you’re a debtor to me,ÂÂÂ
The opposite of bravery... dastardly and unsavory.
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Murdering flesh in opposition to a dream...
a recurring theme...
The Damned Devils Team’s Scheme...
Cowardly bushwhackers on the fringe and in the extreme mainstream.
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The Devil’s not a man walking on land,ÂÂÂ
But a foolish man carries out the Devil’s bloody plan
Since Cain murdered Abel and this fratricide began.
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And good people act like they don’t care,ÂÂÂ
Reacting frigidly, timidly to each diabolical scare,ÂÂÂ
Thinking there’s something fair about modern warfare.
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Where is it fair?ÂÂÂ
Only a fool or a devil would dare...ÂÂÂ
A fool without 2 cents worth of sense to spend,ÂÂÂ
And not a penny’s worth to spare.ÂÂÂ
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Murder is symptomatic of a soul comfortable in the Damned Devil’s Lair.
Murder is not any where near fair, and it certainly isn’t democratic.ÂÂÂ
Murder is not only the tactic of the fanaticÂÂÂ
It’s employed by a regime that’s maniacally autocraticÂÂÂ
‘till murder becomes systematic... automatic...ÂÂÂ
push bottom remote... without a flare for the dramatic.ÂÂÂ
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Cowardly squares fall easily into the Devil’s snaresÂÂÂ
Where he enslaves their behinds and confines their minds.ÂÂÂ
Their Satanic boss relegates them to thoughts of thoughtless chaos...
perpetual gloom... entombed in a gloomy day color-grey-loss...ÂÂÂ
Trapped in forever with only lies for clues
singing “The Lose-lose-kill-or-be-killed-senseless-annihilation Blues”
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Anger to the point of madness... homicidal and wrong.
Then The Devil makes the victim think murdering people is strong.
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True!!! Revenge can be justÂÂÂ
If it cools the blood lust
Brings the balance into level
Corrects anger... checks The Devil.ÂÂÂ
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An eye for and eye... a tooth for a tooth... and a life for a life
Is much better than never ending generational strife.
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But if I kill your brother, it’s a sin to kill mine.
And it’s wrong for my people to retaliate in kind.
It’s wrong to shield kin from the wages of sin.
This is usually how most vicious blood feuds begin.
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The wrong eye is taken. The wrong life snuffed out.
The balance is shaken. ÂÂÂ
Senseless strife then breaks out.
The punishment met did not fit the crime.
Innocent blood let for no reason or rhyme.
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Then The Devil steps in with his provocation to sin
Then grief turns to madness and the grievers throw in with The Jinn.
Iblis can’t revenge for the death of The Saint.
Only murderers murder... Satan’s big move to taint the Image of The Saint and bog down the movement.
While The Saint died for the people to move towards improvement.ÂÂÂ
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The sweet fruit of martyrdom spoiled by Satan induced chaos...ÂÂÂ
Becoming what you hated... the “you-know-I-don’t-play” boss.ÂÂÂ
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And that's the way it always goes.ÂÂÂ
Unless the folks rally round The Saint’s principles and stay on their toes...ÂÂÂ
Dukes up guarding against the damned devil’s blows.
Guarding and praying from day’s dawn till life’s close,
Staying up through the night, while others repose.ÂÂÂ
Being vigilant to avoid The Careless Man’s Woes.
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Cuz when folks rag all the time but don’t get the job done.ÂÂÂ
The devils kill without fear, and rape with abandon.
So, though murder is evil, security is not.ÂÂÂ
Use both courage and wits to cut through the knot,
And secure your own leaders, and expose every plot.
Know that vigilance is often what mourners forgot.
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While I can't say I agree with your thoughts, I see nothing anti-semitic in this poem. Someone either did not understand what you are saying or spoke from ignorance.
An author also writes from his or her own life experience, and while you may not share their feelings they are valid, and so is their art.
They sneak like cowards pretending to be the same, while hatred is boiling red hot in their cold as ice veins.
They care for nothing, peace is not the key, revenge for the deeds they deny, so innocents they seek.
They wash themselves before the deed, taking their time as they plan their murderous cowardly act, while Satan opens to feed.
Freedom fighters as long as they do the killing, but woe when one of theirs dies, like the cowards they are, they scream foul and murder was committed for free.
Sickness is all that I see, nothing romantic and no seventy virgins waiting on their knees.
These crazy people only prove one thing... Never until they change, will they ever deserve their own country!
I wrote this in all of five minutes… Though I don't see anything absolutely anti-Semitic in your poetic prose, there is no mistaking what you are talking about…. I wonder if this poem I wrote was just as clever!
I agree with Dawn, that people write from their life experience and while we may not share their feelings they are valid and so is their art. And, when you write on sensitive and/or controversial topics, you are going to undoubtedly ruffle some feathers and often even anger people who stand against what you believe in, but even then you have your right to feel as you feel and believe as you believe, as do they.
The innocent bystander killed by assassins unknown...
no mercy shown... SACRED HUMAN LIFE... BLOWN...
Justice stabbed through the heart by assassins unknown.
Murderous Colonialism, social democratic capitalism, or religious fanaticism...
All bloody ism schisms, shined through truth's prism are nothings but Satanism.
It's not about oil, or defending one's home soil,
It's about ego, I am better than he, you're a debtor to me
The opposite of bravery... dastardly and unsavory.
It is a shame when people's minds are so polarized that they can only see the evil when it is against them, and are blind to the atrocities that are enacted "for their own good" in their name.
You ask if it was anti-Semitic. I answered your question.
We disagree on a very basic level. I believe sometimes war is a necessary evil.
I will not try to change your view. We need people who always strive for peace. If not for people like you we would descend into utter chaos.
I believe that war is sometimes necessary also. But I believe that modern warfare is not war. I believe it is mass murder. It has no rules. It kills promiscuously and enmasse.
I do not believe that all's fair in love and war, Dawn. I believe that sex between two consenting adults is acceptable behavior. But rape is not. Likewise, I believe that sometimes it is necessary to kill to defend oneself. But I do not believe that it is right to kill to gain land, power, and natural resources. I do not believe it is right to kill unarmed non combatants even if I am warring against those who have usurped my rights and enriched themselves with my possessions.
But I do see Charles deliberately being a bigot.
http://eureferendum.blogspot.com/2006/08/corruption-of-media.html
Ya see Britain inherited Palestine from the Turks. Britian let a few Jews in, some Jews already lived in Palestine, then Britian said to the UN, Palestine is your problem. The Un said we will divide it up. The Arabs said no way, Jews will not be allowed to have a state no matter who owns the land because we hate the idea of filthy Jews being our neghbors as a state or even as Dhimmis.
So who wanted the ethnic purity, jews or Muslim Arabs ?
Read the original instead of all the hype if ya have the guts:
http://domino.un.org/pdfs/AAC25W19.pdf
It paints an ugly picture of the ethnic cleansing Arabs. Now who espoused "ethnic purity" besides the Arabs in 1900's to the present ?? Why our own Dhimmi Carter on April 3, 1976 , his famous "ethnic purity" remark.
This poem from you is clearly relatin'
An anti feeling for one called Satan
The devil is in all those who
Destroy the life that was given to
Each of us so that we learn to love
and to live in peace just like the dove