Fifty Words: Winter Day

Comments: 23

Fred Hose Jan 17, 2007, 1:30am EST

What an unusual picture you create. You have eyes that see. That's wonderful.

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Carol Roach Jan 17, 2007, 1:36am EST

so beautiful

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Corina Carrasco Jan 17, 2007, 1:53am EST

Her wondering innocence has no idea she gave you writing material, yet again!

Nice image of the cat pondering the temptations of the outside world.

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Timothy B. Jan 17, 2007, 1:58am EST

Me likeee.

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Webduck * Jan 17, 2007, 2:21am EST

And wouldn't she have been surprised when that intriguing 'something' melted before she could even sniff it?

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Lydia O. Jan 17, 2007, 7:19am EST

or perhaps she would have defended you from them until she acquired asthma, like Daniel--who was out stalking snow all one long night, sure he could kill them all! Better inside....the has the rhythm and bird-cocked head of a haiku, David. I like it very much! :)

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Cheryl W. Jan 17, 2007, 7:22am EST

This is wonderful, David. It paints such a clear picture in my mind.

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Carolyn Madden Jan 17, 2007, 7:29am EST

" .. cold, and wet and no fun." sounds like any number of chaps i've met over the years. keep her safe David, that's very chivalrous of you.

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♯ ♪ Jan 17, 2007, 8:28am EST

Very fun! Sometimes the grass that looks greener on the other side isn't all that great.

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David Rochester Jan 17, 2007, 12:09pm EST

Thanks to all . . . Carolyn, I laughed at your comment -- that was too funny. Mike -- I was thinking of bringing a snowball in for her to play with, just so she could see what she wasn't missing, but then I decided that would be mean.

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Edward Nudelman Jan 17, 2007, 10:08pm EST

Great one, David. Don't let the cat out.

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Kathleen ♥ L. Jan 17, 2007, 11:20pm EST

You paint such wonderful images with your words... thank you!

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again Jan 18, 2007, 5:39am EST

I enjoyed this, David! But get a dog and throw snowballs at it - get out there and have fun! I would if snowflakes fell in West Oz. Of course, that would be a minor miracle, given that such simply never happens here.

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