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Charismatic Feel

January 14, 2007 10:45 PM EST (Updated: January 23, 2007 10:48 AM EST)

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What is this?
Is this normal?

Its magical drunkenness
Unspoken languages of eyes
Traversing from one heart to other
Tune into lyrical music and sighs.

Its misty caressing touch
Brings the flowery togetherness
Drenching the unseen mind strings
With unification and feverishness.

It becomes a fragrant dreamy sojourn
Squeezing the best of every vibes
Into vibrant love nectar sweetie
Ensuring joyous union of mundane lives.

Neither have I understood
Nor do I want to maul
And go deep into this riddle
That lights the earthy soul.

Is this what all started with Adam and Eve?

Tags: random musing, free write, poetry writing, love, poem, rhyming poems, poetry, poetic expression, rhyming poetry, writing

To Groups: Poetry, Free Thinking, Poetic expressions, Love, Rhyming corner, originalpoetryaspirants, Light of Poetry

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Comments: 5

carolyn t. Jan 14, 2007, 11:35pm EST

Very nice work, Manoj. It covers love quite poetically. But will we ever know about Adam and Eve? I think it was more than just an apple that caused us to enjoy that loving feeling. Perhaps loneliness had something to do with it, even back then. I enjoyed this piece very much. Thanks

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Magi the magical poet is riding the wind again Jan 15, 2007, 3:55am EST

Manoj, this is a lovely poem with a very BIG question. The answer is that deep within us all is the longing to join, to be as one. But that is not of the body, for only hearts and souls can fuse into the deep intimacy which is commune.

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Barbra L. Jan 15, 2007, 9:40am EST

Wow! manoj, I may be at a loss for words here! This is wonderful!!!!!!!

"It's magical drunkenness" brilliant conclusion! Excellent, excellent work!

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vijay kumar Jan 15, 2007, 9:12pm EST

Language of eyes from one heart to the other.. Riddle that lights the soul. Union of the souls. This is what sustains and brightens the life on earth. Your phrasing 'magical drunkenness' is truly fantastic. I am drunken with the beauty of this poem.

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