If You Say Love

If you say love
I'll jump through a hoop
If you say love love
I'll loop the loop
If you say love love love
I'll be cock of the hoop

I always thought nothing could be worse
Than writing love things in verse

But if you say dance
I'll spare you a glance
If you say dance dance
I'll strut and prance
If you say dance dance dance
I'll show my proud stance

But please don't say love so soft and demur
Unless you want to see a big cat purr

Comments: 15

JoAnne D. Jan 9, 2007, 5:51pm EST

Great, it has my vote.

Fred Hose Jan 9, 2007, 5:58pm EST

Thank you JoAnne. Glad that you could join in the fun. Thanks for the 10.

Fred Hose Jan 10, 2007, 1:53am EST

Aha Liz...the big cat...hahaha. Adorable by the way

Fred Hose Jan 10, 2007, 8:46am EST

Thank you James. Glad you liked it.

Richard Melendez Jan 10, 2007, 12:17pm EST

Fred... the happiness in this poem is quite evident. It bounces along in a playful spirit.

Bluey B. Jan 10, 2007, 12:19pm EST

You're a zany guy Fred.I think it would be a trip to dance around in your head.

Fred Hose Jan 10, 2007, 12:44pm EST

Amy I'm so sorry. This one was posted earlier. It slipped through under a different title. Won't happen again.

Fred Hose Jan 10, 2007, 12:51pm EST

Hi Richard Yeea it's good to go for a fun ride sometimes. If I get one or two smiles I'll be happy. I'll put you down as one. OK

Fred Hose Jan 10, 2007, 12:55pm EST

Hi Bluey If you smiled then I'm happy. Don't go around in my head the echos will drive you nuts.

Fred Hose Jan 10, 2007, 1:41pm EST

Thank you Amy. You're welcome especially if you need a smile.