Love's Sweet Bliss

Hot skin,

cool sheets;

You and me,

a delicious treat;

Gentle caresses,

lips parted;

Oh Love,

look what you've started!

Passion's promise,

fuel to the fire;

Come here, Honey;

Let us quench this desire;

Fingers tangled

up in my hair, lips

slipping and sliding

from here to there;

Skin to skin.

nothing between;

Only a fire

that cannot be seen;

We rise, we fall,

love's sweet bliss;

Two become one

on a night such as this.

Comments: 20

Shelly W. Jan 9, 2007, 9:06am EST

I just had my first written orgasm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!haha
Me like this alot, Shelly

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Dawne Joy Jan 9, 2007, 9:26am EST

excellent, interestingly erotic poem. Loved it!

will you publish this to www.poemcentral.gather.com?

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Walter, The Patron Saint of Gather Jan 9, 2007, 9:27am EST

Too bad ol' Barry White isn't with us any longer.... I think he could have put that to music. I can hear him singing it now...

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Virginia M. Jan 9, 2007, 9:41am EST

LAFFIN @ Shellys' comment sooo hard I can hardly type!!!!Thanks, Shelly. I needed that!!!:)

Excellent poem Cheryl. You sure can express things in a nice way without being vulgar- You got talent!

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ravi bedi Jan 9, 2007, 9:50am EST

Walter, you said it right. He was the fittest to sing this song. However, to do justice to Cheryl, we have to pick up on a female voice...how about Nancy Sinatra or Natlie?

Cheryl, next time I will keep a fire extinguisher by my side when I read your poem! I think I should compose one soon.

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Hanny M. Jan 9, 2007, 10:04am EST

I love it!!!

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Sue * Jan 9, 2007, 11:20am EST

Wow...is your life as exciting as your poetry?

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Terry S. Jan 9, 2007, 11:28am EST

Ok Cheryl, I am off to the shower to cool down!!

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Spencer T. Jan 9, 2007, 11:43am EST

My my my, Cheryl.
Good stuff.

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Cecile V. Jan 9, 2007, 12:52pm EST

Hot passion, and do I detect a twinkle in your eye and a bit of humor too?

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Cheryl W. Jan 9, 2007, 2:12pm EST

Thanks, everyone. I'm glad I got your motors running this morning....hehe.

Sue....to answer my question. No...my life is not as exciting as my writing....lol. I just have a good imagination.

Cecile...yep, a definite twinkle in my eyes...and a bit of humor as well.

Dawne...I will take a look at the site and would be glad to share it there. Thanks!

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