Superb! This very much reminds me of Basho, whose works I also admire greatly. And whether coincidental or not, I find that your icon image seems to perfectly complement the verse - the bare tree, the bare bench, the grey tones of the water and sky and the birds adding the dimension of life and movement to the scene. Keep up the great work!
Cheryl, Thank you for your kind comment. I have enjoyed reading your haiku for some time now. I'm glad you enjoyed this modest one of mine.
julian, and Edward, I'm flattered by these generous words from such talented writers. I also am a big fan of Basho and the ancient Japanese poets. Haiku is such a small clear vessel in which examine little zen colored chunks of life. Done well, it is one of my favorite forms.
Cindy, Thanks and cheers!
~juniper~tank you mon, 'ears wishin' you da same!
Tonia, Thank you. I find these cycles beautiful too.
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And whether coincidental or not, I find that your icon image seems to perfectly complement the verse - the bare tree, the bare bench, the grey tones of the water and sky and the birds adding the dimension of life and movement to the scene.
Keep up the great work!
julian, and Edward, I'm flattered by these generous words from such talented writers. I also am a big fan of Basho and the ancient Japanese poets. Haiku is such a small clear vessel in which examine little zen colored chunks of life. Done well, it is one of my favorite forms.
Cindy, Thanks and cheers!
~juniper~tank you mon, 'ears wishin' you da same!
Tonia, Thank you. I find these cycles beautiful too.
Happy New Year to you all!
Great Haiku.