by Virginia M.
Member since:
August 31, 2006

What Am I Made of?

December 30, 2006 01:29 AM EST
views: 16 | rating: 10/10 (4 votes) | comments: 10

 

I am made of the wind that carries,

the fragrance of a flower.

I am made of the mountain stream,

gaining momentum towards a larger power.

I am made of the early morning dawn,

that whispers yet another dream.

I am made of a mothers care,

as a doe protects her fawn.

I am made of little green apples,

upon the tree and sour.

I am made of many wonders,

and wonder if you care.

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Comments: 10

Kathryn E. Dec 30, 2006, 1:32am EST
Oh Virginia, this was very, very beautiful. Visually rich in imagery and many senses.
Carol Roach Dec 30, 2006, 2:59am EST
lovely
Charity M. Dec 30, 2006, 9:34am EST
(((So wonderfully written)))
Sherry Asbury Dec 30, 2006, 10:50am EST
Stunning little poem - so beautiful and filled with imagination. I really enjoyed reading this. Love the theme that we are all connected to everything else.
Nice work.
Virginia M. Dec 31, 2006, 4:48am EST
I value all your comments. Thank you so much!
David C. Dec 31, 2006, 7:39am EST
very nice thoughts in this poem!
Edward Nudelman Dec 31, 2006, 1:31pm EST
We care, Virginia! Lovely sentiments, with thanks.
Loretta J. Jan 3, 2007, 11:15am EST
Pretty nice.

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