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One Day...

December 18, 2006 10:00 AM EST

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Oh! so elusive,

Butterfly-like, you escape

My grasp, poetry

Tags: poetry haiku, random musings, life, arts, effort, writing

To Groups: This & That, A Writer's Life, First Time Writers., Poetry Express, Anything and Everything, Poetry, haiku, Haiku Cafe

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Comments: 9

Apryl Just Apryl Dec 18, 2006, 11:59am EST

Irony can be fun! I love this Moya!!

John F Walter Dec 18, 2006, 12:09pm EST

Very witty in its puncturing of its own prosody, Moya! I liked the delicate flavor you give to it, like the ephemerality of words spoken and gone.

Jim Ross Dec 18, 2006, 3:41pm EST

I know the feeling, Moya. Your expression of it in "One Day . . ." is exquisite.

Maureen Sullivan Stemberg Dec 18, 2006, 8:00pm EST

Moya, very fun & quite wonderful.

mona d. Dec 19, 2006, 9:17am EST

love the visual. you always manage to make me smile, dear moya. thank you.

HGM Moya Goatley Dec 19, 2006, 9:45am EST

Thank you all for reading and yur kind comments. Moya


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