by Charity B.
Member since:
October 16, 2006

"Poem...for Valentines"

August 21, 2007 02:17 PM UTC (Updated: August 21, 2007 02:42 PM UTC)
views: 0 | comments: 13

Angels

       greet...

the sky

      and the Sea

 

Valentine wishes amongst the fishes

Ocean waves and salty sea

Two angels~bestowed their presence be

Wind sung love~ on the wind chimes above

Ambiance of crested blue

Clouds transformed of majestic lieu

Heaven's visit from up above

Angels of valentines...valentines of love

                 ~`~`~`~

Comments: 13

Charity B. Aug 21, 2007, 2:18pm UTC
(((Love and beauty of the heavens...an artwork of mine over the Sea of blue...for you)))
James B. Aug 21, 2007, 3:48pm UTC
I like this one a lot.
Charity B. Aug 21, 2007, 4:14pm UTC
(((Thank you for your compliments...)))
Lisa Frost Bailey Aug 21, 2007, 5:05pm UTC
lovely
Lawrence U. Aug 21, 2007, 9:08pm UTC
Awesome!
andrew c. Aug 22, 2007, 3:31am UTC
great poem
sheila ~the hapless housewife~ j. Aug 22, 2007, 6:06pm UTC
Very good rhythm and imagery! Good one!
Ricky Fico Aug 22, 2007, 6:46pm UTC
Sweet Valentine, I am singing this rhyme, half-measures, up tempo and in time....

Very nice, indeed, Char!
Mary H. Aug 22, 2007, 8:54pm UTC
I love this poem and the art is one of my very favorites
Janet E. Aug 22, 2007, 10:16pm UTC
What a nice poem. Another favorite : )
Janet E. Aug 22, 2007, 10:18pm UTC
Nice indeed. One of my favorites : )

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