Hi, Sherry--I always think of sanctuary as a place of peace and tranquility so I was caught off guard by the idea of sinking into it. Still, the poem treats one of the reasons we find retreats, very well. Good job.
Wow...you have such a different syle of writing than I have seen, and I really like it. You put so much emphasis in a few words while others can use paragraphs and still not mean a darn thing, so great job!
As I am a mental health person, my sanctuary is like a marshmallow that I sink into until it covers my ears, cutting off all sound. PTSD never lets go... so I sink LOL
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As I am a mental health person, my sanctuary is like a marshmallow that I sink into until it covers my ears, cutting off all sound.
PTSD never lets go... so I sink LOL