Warmth

This poem was the Myspace comments contest winner a few days back in http://www.everywritersresource.com/

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Comfort sleeps with quilt

They snore in chilly winter

And wake up with broods.

Naked we awake

Tingly moonlight drenches us

Sleep eludes but fresh.

Frosty dawn steps in

They shiver with hot coffee

Entwined cozy us.

Sun behind the clouds

Wishes wavy heat transfer

And then shines with winks.

Comments: 11

Dolphi D. Dec 8, 2006, 7:39am EST

Excellent poem, Manoj. Congratulations on winning the Myspace comments contest and on your poem being featured on Everywritrsresource.

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John F Walter Dec 8, 2006, 8:36am EST

Wonderful poem of intimacy, experience and nature's entering into human life, in the softest and most lyrical of voices. Accolades, manoj, on winning the myspace contest as well.

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manoj sanyal Dec 8, 2006, 10:52pm EST

Thanks Dolphi D, Thanks John, Thanks Cindy for appreciations.

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Cheryl W. Dec 9, 2006, 11:17am EST

This is wondeful. Very well written, Manoj

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Ron (in complete sheeple overload) W. Dec 9, 2006, 1:38pm EST

Intimate times, in love and not at a point where the worries about the outside world intrude. Very good work, I think.

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manoj sanyal Dec 9, 2006, 10:42pm EST

hanks Cheryl.
Thanks Ron.
Happy that you liked.

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vijay kumar Dec 10, 2006, 12:57pm EST

'Naked we awake Tinkly moonlight drenches us'...Beautiful images and ending with the sun shining with winks. Love helps you forget everything, especially when it is natural!
Loved reading this fabulous work.

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manoj sanyal Dec 11, 2006, 1:46am EST

Thanks Vijay for appreciations.

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Barbra L. Dec 11, 2006, 12:30pm EST

Congratulations, manoj!!! I love your beginning line so much "Comfort sleeps with quilt"-- you could not have chosen a warmer, more invitational beginning line for your poem. Very nice!!!

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manoj sanyal Dec 11, 2006, 11:33pm EST

Thanks Barbara for appreciation of the thought.

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