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Dejame Vivir~Let Me Live

November 24, 2006 10:25 PM EST (Updated: November 24, 2006 10:26 PM EST)

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Dejame Vivir

Ya no me vienen las lágrimas
he llorado demasiado
desde que te fuiste
he llorado como sí te hubieras
muerto
aunque en tus ojos,
yo soy las que ha muerto.

Mi renacimeiento está en tus manos.
dejame vivir
dejame renacer
aunque sea
sin ti
dejame vivir

Let Me Live

The tears no longer come
I have cried so much
since you left
I have cried as if you had
died
even though in your eyes
I am the one that has died.

My rebirth is in your hands
let me live
let me recreate myself
even if it be
without you
let me live.

~Corina Carrasco

[Note: I have since come to realize that it is never a good idea to put your life in someone else's. Never again. ]

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Comments: 6

sea gull l. Nov 24, 2006, 10:31pm EST

still, if that experience came to create this beautiful poem, it was all worth it..all in the name of art.
good to have reached the conclusion though, i must agree full hearted with you on that, live for your own sake and keep writing powerful poetry even without gettng hurt( is that possible?)