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by Virginia M.

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August 31, 2006

Disappearing Act

November 21, 2006 11:41 AM EST

views: 13 | rating: 10/10 (3 votes) | comments: 3

Abracadabra

Presto-change-o, you are gone,

Disappearing works.

Can I do the same as you?

Painful chords chant useless words.

Tags: random musings, love, tanka, relationships

To Groups: Night time rhymes, Tanka, Poetically Incorrect, originalpoetryaspirants, Poets and Writers, Poetic expressions, The Critics' Corner, Virtual Muse, poetryloverz, This & That, ~Writing from the Heart~, Random Musings

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Edward Nudelman Nov 21, 2006, 2:17pm EST

Good one Viriginia... it works, and it doesn't work. Precisely!

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amanda wallin Nov 21, 2006, 11:49pm EST

I love the last line and the futility of it is summed up so succinctly. Excellent job!

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Jim Ross Nov 28, 2006, 12:02am EST

Nice tanka, Virginia.

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