November 16, 2006 01:38 AM EST
(Updated: November 16, 2006 03:59 PM EST)
Midnight Awareness
Nothing pierced my sleep
Yet my eyes glide open
To greet your sweet smile
Copyright 2006 Jim Ross
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Comments: 35
My pleasure, Val.
Hi, Grandma Maggy, thank you.
Cheers, Juniper.
Thank you, Wrick. It's not as physically splendid as your beautiful nature photography. Keep up the GREAT work.
Yeah, d m., love at first peep.
Thank you, Sheila.
As it turns out, Anne . . . she's very special.
Hi, Amy, thank you for reminding me about HOW haiku fits into the spectrum of communication. I truly appreciate that.
Hi, Wilhelmine, your point is a good one but I am faced with two problems in line two; the first is mechanical as it needs seven syllables; the second is the need (perceived) to convey "lack of friction" in the sense of an effortless, no strings attached opening—as in closed to open with no activity to produce it. Sorry for the long-winded answer. I thank you for making me study my choice.
Thank you, Ed.
Hi, Tanja. Maybe he will, someday?
I agree, Sheri. The past tense just crept in there. Presto, it's changed. Thank you for that.
Wow! Thank you, Wrick. I appreciate that coming from a person with your photographic skills.
Thank you, Connie.