Just a poem that I've written, it turned out rather good. So I thought I would go ahead and share it with everyone. Most of my own friends think it's depressing, and that it's a plea for attention. I wish they'd learn to read the context rather than just the words. The basic jist of the poem is, don't let a broken heart keep you from trusting people in the future. Or you're going to miss out on something that could be quite beautiful.
The pieces are jagged
Tearing into self-esteem
Broken fragments of dreams
Smashed desires
Tiny slivers of what could have been
When a broken heart guides you
It cuts not only your soul
But those who try to come near
Never let the past hurts
Ruin what could happen tomorrow
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Comments: 6
nicely written, sad and hopeful.
Love ya, Babe.