A love poem as desired by Barbary Chaapel
…vide her comments in my poem "Thank you – my cell phone!!" …./viewArticle.jsp?articleId=281474976825027
Magical Togetherness
Some paintings cannot be brushed
Few tunes do not have lyrics
Thoughtful poems are difficult to put on papers
They just color the minds as limericks.
The moment I saw you for the first time
Although I could not express my love
You brought music to my soul
And you were flowing in my blood.
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I had a feeling that you were just for me
And it required some efforts with my love blind
To stimulate and awaken your hidden passions
As destined togetherness of our bodies and mind.
From that first meeting till date
You remained and still continuing as my wife
And we are progressing hand in hand
Enjoying the untold poetries of life.
Our mutual concerns and openness
Never required to tell each other, 'I love you'
And we are sailing together in Eternal River
Dancing with our symphonic orchestras in lieu.
A poem from my book
(Under hard copy publishing in India)
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Comments: 15
Thank you for posting this very beautiful love poem for your wife. Some of your lines are so memorable, two of them being: "Enjoying the untold poetries of life" and "We are sailing together in Eternal River."
I'm glad I ask you to post a love poem. Thank you. We are all richer for it!
Barbary ... Happy that you liked.
Thanks dear all once again.
I wish I could write poems of love again.
I just can't seem of think of love very much now-a-days, maybe later in a future date peace of mind will come forth and the quiet will be there so I can see much again.
But for now the food of love isn't.
Much less the thought.
However, even so there is love still, quiet and present.
As well as the tears
I will revisit this often. Truly a beautiful heartfelt poem that tugs at the strings of one's heart. I especially love the lines referenced by vijay and Barbary:
"Thoughtful poems are difficult to put on papers"
"They just color the minds as limericks"
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"And we are sailing together in Eternal River"
"Dancing with our symphonic orchestras in lieu"
What a vision you've painted! Thank you.
However, even so there is love still, quiet and present.
As well as the tears ... I agree dear.
Wish you happy times and great days in near future.
Take care.
Dear Barbara,
Thanks for your appreciations. Yes dear... I consider myself very lucky.
Sing sweet songs... always.
I revisited your poem today. The last two lines brought a special comfort to me. I think these are two of the most beautiful lines I've seen. The depth of their meaning is 'eternal.'
Thank you very much for the revisit.
Enjoy your time.
I am overwhelmed.
Have nice times.