by amanda wallin

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August 30, 2006

Curious?: Diamente

October 28, 2006 02:53 AM EDT (Updated: October 28, 2006 12:08 PM EDT)

views: 45 | rating: 9.9/10 (10 votes) | comments: 17

Men

salty, firm

grasping, probing, surging

clench, erupt. spasm, nectar

teasing, panting, sprawling

tangy, smooth

Women

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Tags: opposite, 2 adj 3 verbs, 2 nouns, diamente, noun

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Comments: 17

Corina Carrasco Oct 28, 2006, 2:57am EDT

Nice. I love the pacing of this...very much like the act itself! Good job, again!

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Jared G. Oct 28, 2006, 3:00am EDT

Short and hot. I'll say no more...............

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William M. Oct 28, 2006, 3:02am EDT

I'm headed for a cold shower.

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David Rochester Oct 28, 2006, 3:04am EDT

Delicious.

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Miz Lynn aka/BooBoo Oct 28, 2006, 3:17am EDT

Whoaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! I like it, I like it a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)))

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Wendy S. Oct 28, 2006, 4:17am EDT

Oh my, this is absolutely luscious. Mmmm Hmmm, yep.

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Donald H. Oct 28, 2006, 6:35am EDT

Great imagery.....!

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Roxanne N. Oct 28, 2006, 8:06am EDT

Very nicely written. Give me more!!

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Apryl Just Apryl Oct 28, 2006, 9:22am EDT

Boy, I'm glad it's the weekend !!! lol

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Cheryl W. Oct 28, 2006, 1:54pm EDT

Love it!

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Richard Melendez Oct 28, 2006, 2:14pm EDT

Amanda... a tight sensual gem and explosive for such a short piece. BTW... why the title change with the added question mark?

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Shaunee C. Oct 28, 2006, 3:36pm EDT

very good

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Marilyn is looking for whatever there is. N. Oct 28, 2006, 4:49pm EDT

Love it (as usual) and the title was what had me clicking away on it! :)

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Angie O. Oct 29, 2006, 12:09pm EST

Yummy!!!!!

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Mark Jepsen Nov 13, 2006, 6:49pm EST

Me salty, you tangy.

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