by gautami tripathy
Member since:
May 2, 2006

split moment-----Haiku

October 22, 2006 12:33 PM EDT
views: 30 | rating: 10/10 (7 votes) | comments: 13
in split of a moment
during a long drawn breath
i inhale a fly

(c)gautami.tripathy
~July 17, 2006
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Comments: 13

John S. (arizona) Oct 22, 2006, 12:38pm EDT
Yikes! Good one. Thanks.
Vicky P. Oct 22, 2006, 1:37pm EDT
I hate when that happens.
Virginia M. Oct 22, 2006, 1:43pm EDT
oh, yuk!...It is true, how it happens:)
Anne B. Grote Oct 22, 2006, 1:45pm EDT
tasty?
gautami tripathy Oct 22, 2006, 1:58pm EDT
LOL! It is as Virginia said...yuck!
Hershal P. Oct 22, 2006, 3:57pm EDT
an average human gobbles down 18 spiders in his lifetime, while yawning in sleep.....what a slimy fact to remember!
Larry H. Oct 22, 2006, 5:05pm EDT
it would get caught in my throat and take hours to get out.
Marsha B. Oct 22, 2006, 5:54pm EDT
Never inhaled a fly but a moth did fly into my mouth once. Ick!!!

This was cute. Brought a smile to my face. :-)
John L. Oct 22, 2006, 9:30pm EDT
would that they were as easily exhaled.
gautami tripathy Oct 23, 2006, 8:30am EDT
Hmm. Thanks for the comments.
amanda wallin Oct 23, 2006, 4:02pm EDT
Roses are red
Dead roses are black
Spit out that fly
And give it a smack!
Madame Donna C. Oct 26, 2006, 4:16pm EDT
gautami, this one made me laugh out loud!

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