by Virginia M.

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August 31, 2006

Things are Looking Up

October 22, 2006 12:03 PM EDT

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Gravity released,

footsteps touch the highest cloud,

because of your love,

Solemn expressions are gone,

and rejoicing now begins.

Tags: random musings, love, tanka, spirituality, relationships

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Sherry Asbury Oct 22, 2006, 12:09pm EDT

How romantic! Delightful verse.

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Virginia M. Oct 22, 2006, 12:31pm EDT

Thank you Sherry:)

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julian 'blighted karma' three Oct 22, 2006, 12:40pm EDT

Light and uplifting! This does capture that stage in the relationship when the two people realize that the love shared between them will be enough to come through not only the good times but also life's challenges. Well done.

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Anne B. Grote Oct 22, 2006, 1:48pm EDT

Joyful!

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amanda wallin Oct 22, 2006, 2:21pm EDT

Ah, the blissful stage of uniting as one. Beautifully put!

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Barbra L. Oct 22, 2006, 3:06pm EDT

Virginia:

Great content! "because of your love". . . How powerful (and TRUE.)"

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Susan A. Oct 22, 2006, 5:46pm EDT

nice one

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Jim Ross Oct 22, 2006, 10:56pm EDT

Lighthearted fulfillment exposed. Beautiful, Virginia.

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