by Cheryl W.
Member since:
December 10, 2005

Tidal I

October 22, 2006 09:29 AM EDT (Updated: December 17, 2008 12:29 PM EST)
views: 43 | rating: 9.2/10 (10 votes) | comments: 12

You wash over me,

cleanse me,

carry me away

and bring me back home;

Tidal is what you are,

and I wait for you as

a grain of sand

upon the shores of time.

 

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Comments: 12

Anne B. Grote Oct 22, 2006, 9:32am EDT
such hope and devotion! Thanks!
Spencer T. Oct 22, 2006, 12:11pm EDT
Marvelous, as I stamp it in my soul.
Shelly W. Oct 22, 2006, 12:25pm EDT
a grain of sand upon the sands of time, to go where no one has gone before, to freak out new worlds, haha
John F Walter Oct 22, 2006, 12:33pm EDT
Just lovely, Cheryl.
Bluey B. Oct 22, 2006, 1:09pm EDT
So simple and beautiful,no more needs be said. Thankyou Cheryl.
tuwanda t. Oct 22, 2006, 3:43pm EDT
Lovely
David Rochester Oct 22, 2006, 10:33pm EDT
I wish I had such faith in God, the world, the benevolence of Life.
Granny Janny H. Oct 23, 2006, 12:22am EDT
Universal
Whole
Complete
Magnificent
Lori White Oct 23, 2006, 10:48am EDT
Excellent piece!
Jim Ross Oct 23, 2006, 3:35pm EDT
I love the picture this paints, Cheryl. Good job.
Captain Ken Pothier Oct 23, 2006, 7:17pm EDT
I am glad that your grain of sand is on the same beach where we gather and can share such concise and meaningful words in verse2
Cheryl W. Oct 23, 2006, 7:19pm EDT
Thank you, everyone...for the comments.

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